IELTS Task 1 Writing - Transform Band 6 to Band 8

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IELTS Task 1 Writing is often overlooked by students. In fact, more students fail IELTS Writing because of Task 1 than Task 2.
This video will show you the common mistakes that lead to a Band 6 and then show you the simple changes you can make to improve your Task 1 Academic writing to a Band 8.
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Link to IELTS Task 1 Academic Marking Criteria- www.ielts.org/-/media/pdfs/wr...
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00:00 Welcome
01:15 Task Achievement
12:27 Coherence and Cohesion
19:54 Vocabulary
21:37 Grammar
22:08 Task 1 Introduction
23:07 Task 1 Overview
28:37 Task 1 Details Paragraphs

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@joyagao6100 Год назад

OMG!!!!!thank you soooooo much! i watched this video like 5 days before my 2nd round test, and today i got my result came out, i got band 7.5 !!! 1 year ago, i struggled between band 6 and 6.5, but this time around is 7.5 at writing!!! what an inspiring and helpful tutorial!!! 5 STAR recommended! i can't thank you enough!!!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

That's amazing! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.

@tangembi 10 месяцев назад

Am writing tomorrow as well

@Robinson98984 3 месяца назад

@@tangembi hi! what's your band?

@VOKASINEMA 4 месяца назад

This was insane! So grateful to get this video, because I need to study more IELTS for my taking test around May in this year, 2024.

@CafeMaster Год назад

The 'gun to your head' analogy is bang on! (pun intended). This approach really helps in saving time and grasping the overall picture quickly & accurately👍

@desukanani480 10 месяцев назад

OMG I cannot thank you enough for your advice. I have never been taught this at school before I saw your video.

@HustleandHacks Год назад

Thank you so much bro, I just studied 3 hours watching your video and got 7 bands overall. Really happy

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Amazing news! Congratulations!

@trashaccount4854 Месяц назад

rlly😂 I am preparing 5 month nearly for 7 band score but my reading stuck in 6/6.5 even though i solve all cambridge books 2 times

@akwaugo29 Год назад

You're a real one. I got a band 8 and it's my first time taking this exam. Binge-watching most of your videos if not all did a lot, especially with the writing and speaking. God bless you💝

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Congratulations!

@muhammadrazikani7951 7 месяцев назад

what is ur first languange bro?

@akwaugo29 7 месяцев назад

@@muhammadrazikani7951 Igbo

@tranthainghi827 Год назад

OMG! i really want you to know that your hard work, dedication, and passion for teaching are truly appreciated. Wish you all the best

@Strawberry_0408 9 месяцев назад

Thank you!! I was writing every single detail and was struggling to finish it within 20 mins

@nikitagoel5884 9 месяцев назад

amazing tutorial......grateful to u sir..I was completely lost in the graphs...finding my way ..thanks to u

@jennyvoswiftie Год назад

Thanks for sharing those valuable tips on how to transform from band 6 to band 8! I believe the most significant difference is what key features you select to present and how to summarize it the most logical ways😊

@pinguu3999 3 месяца назад

Awesome how your english is so clear.

@evanrizasafiqariadi6058 Год назад

Thanks so much Chris for ALL of ur tips n tricks. Even tho I only got 6 in my writing but I got an overall of 7.5 with L 7.5 R 8.5 and S 7.0 from only watching your videos. And not to mention it was my first time attempting IELTS! :D

@sabjaanee Год назад

share with a few reading tips please

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.

@BellaZahraisyah-ss2ls 5 месяцев назад

A simple thank you wouldn't be enough. I watched this particular video literally hours before my test and got 7.5 in writing and 8 overall. Mind you this was my first try. Truly appreciate your videos✨️

@Ieltsadvantage 5 месяцев назад

Great job!

@odilova.dilbar Год назад

Omg, now I realize that I've been making pretty much the same mistakes. Thank you for sharing the efficient ways of writing task 1 for free!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're most welcome!

@wilsonruano9666 Год назад

Teacher Chris, thank you so much for your tips to improve writing.

@phuongchiluu2990 Месяц назад

Thank you so much!! I watched your videos about ielts writing one day before the official test, and I've got 7 for my writing. A big surprise to me as I had always struggled with writing skills, but you just made it straightforward and comprehensible. So lucky that I watched your tutorial

@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад

Great job!

@abhinavpsuresh7162 Год назад

Tomorrow is my exam

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Good luck with it.

@vengeanceee Год назад

Mine too

@202_Channel Год назад

Me too

@jagroopsinghxiisci1029 Год назад

@@202_Channel all the best guys

@rosemarybassey3287 Год назад

Me too

@olegpkv 6 месяцев назад

Thank you, Chris, you nailed it! I've just received the results and finally got 7 on academic writing. I did nothing but strictly follow your suggestions in both writing tasks, and it worked!

@Ieltsadvantage 6 месяцев назад

Well done!

@nguyentuongvy2204 Год назад

Thank you. Line graph seems much more easier from now ❤

@sonukaur3032 6 месяцев назад

I have learnt a lot knowledge about task 2 ..from your video which I did not get from my classes..thre is something amazing special teaching ways.which student's basic need..thx..✌️✨i appreciate your teaching ways..👍🥀

@OnlineEducationTraining Год назад

Thank you very much for sharing video. Hope you well and continue to share with everyone.

@user-rrrkkk64 11 месяцев назад

With your teachings, I've learnt to take everything into my account logically ... Thanks a tonne for giving me a better approach to deal with things around...

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

You are most welcome. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@yanjalaale4119 Год назад

You really provide priceless information for the students, catching the root cause and guiding us to improve our thinking.I hearlty appreciate your effort❤️

@baooanlegia383 3 месяца назад

This video is really meaningful for us. Thank you so much ❤.

@md4119 6 месяцев назад

Exclusive style of explaining, man! You gave good examples for addressing my mind-set which is detail-oriented in writing....1- Start with task 2 2- Imagine someone putting a gun on ur head and asking u to address 4-5 points from this data. I am going to keep this in my head for task 1

@Unnikrishnanalpy 5 месяцев назад

Superb sir It was a really wonderful session!!! Fabulous piece of information!!! ❤

@jennydeyro6634 Год назад

Im so thankful..you are amazing teacher😇😇

@k15-ma-nguyenuctai52 10 месяцев назад

thank you so much for this video :) it help me a lots in writing

@mehjabeen9563 Год назад

U are such a great teacher

@alfycharan4421 10 месяцев назад

Thank you so so much. Just 1 hour before my exam I saw your video and your essay writing advice to be strong about opinion was so good . I got 8/9 band in writing n 8.50 in reading overall 7.5 band. You are a real teacher. None of the channel is as good as you are. I didn’t have much time to prepare . I put hardly overall 24 hours in preparation bcz of my full time job . You are the best man. Keep on doing this good work .

@Ieltsadvantage 10 месяцев назад

Excellent! Congratulations!

@shifasaiyed6639 6 месяцев назад

You'r the only person who is teaching in that way❤❤❤❤❤❤.

@iozmen Год назад

wow, thanks a lot for all the plain, simple and very very effective tips.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Glad it was helpful! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@onyekaemmanuel677 Год назад

Thank u so much Chris. I have been stuck on 6.0 in writing but after coming across your videos I just got a 7.5 in writing.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Well done! Keep it up!

@drgulrukhshahid591 4 месяца назад

Hi, I need 7.5 in writing but stuck at 6.5-7. Can you kindly let me know how you prepared

@user-eb1vq6uh2r Год назад

Hello IELTS advantage! I want to thank you because with your videos and tips, I was able to get an 8 with 1,5 months of preparation. I like your way of presenting the material and advice. Good luck to everyone who prepares!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

This is amazing news! Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.

@alleldorado3600 Год назад

@@Ieltsadvantage are yo

@motroihairoibaroitanauauau8959 Год назад

really like this vid ^^ , i hope that it'll improve my Wri band

@ishitabhattacharyya1538 Год назад

Hey Chris, I just wanted to say thank you so so much for all your advice. I gave the IELTS (academic) for the first time and I really had no time to prepare because of school and entrance exam prep. I watched your videos in the last 3 days before the test. I was sceptical about writing, because I really don't like writing. I used to think that in the writing section, you just have to think of lots of ideas and content to put into your essay. But your videos completely changed my views and I followed what you said. Made my writing clear and simple. ANDDD I GOT AN 8 in WRITING!! I got an overall 8, as well. I am 100% sure I couldn't have got an 8 in writing, had I not seen your videos. Once again, thank you so much, Chris! You're an amazing teacher.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Thank you for your gratitude and appreciation. I am happy to know that I could make a positive impact on your IELTS journey. I wish you continued success in all your future endeavors.

@nehabhargav3223 9 месяцев назад

How long had you practised for writing???

@gokulkumarmuvvla6038 Год назад

Nice information that's really helps me in my preparation 😊

@sashidharan1192 Год назад

I used to include conclusion in my earlier days in exam preparation, because I use them as a filler contact. Later I read the IDP website they don't mention to add conclusion in task 1. Now I ease of these mistakes. You are great teacher. These information cannot obtain from So-called IELTS teachers.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Glad you find this lesson helpful.

@marattelgoziev871 11 месяцев назад

Great instructions for teachers.

@Lil___ Год назад

Finally I'm done with my IELTS, I followed your advice for the writing section & I got 7 in it Thank you so much Writing was my weakest area of all the 4 modules, I'm just glad I stumbled upon your channel

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.

@dadmehrghasemi3384 7 месяцев назад

I just love your videos ❤

@garynilesunson848 6 месяцев назад

Thank you very much, the best teacher!👍👍👍👍

@user-im5pb9yt6u Год назад

This video is marvelous! Thank you so much!

@lumprisca4526 10 месяцев назад

I am writing my ilets exams tomorrow and so lucky to storm on this master's peace video to crown my preparations and increased my confidence in writing more. Can you all wish me good luck please. I will definitely come back here to testify because his videos has been my only source of study material. Thank you Chris 🙏

@Ieltsadvantage 10 месяцев назад

Hi there, please read this article from our website 'IELTS Advantage- My IELTS exam is tomorrow, what should I do?" for some last minute tips. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test.

@nirmalajain6426 Год назад

Watched this applied the tips scored exactly 8. Thank you for such quality content.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

That's great!

@Ariya897 3 месяца назад

that was Extremely helpful

@bimshika 11 месяцев назад

Thanks so much for your valuable tips, I managed to get my desired score from a 6 to a 7 within a week thanks to your channel. Even if you have less time or resources, anyone can watch this channel and sit confidently for the exam.

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.

@mehjabeen9563 Год назад

U are amazing and doing a very good job

@AashishKhanal-dz5pv 7 месяцев назад

25:01 Greatest tip of all time. Chris is the best.

@sinabajijealphonsine9886 Год назад

Thank you for your videos. They help me to improve my listing and hearing,

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You are most welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@anuthomas9329 3 месяца назад

Highly appreciate your efforts. Please make videos like this

@Ieltsadvantage 3 месяца назад

Thank you, I will.

@MohitSuryadevara 4 месяца назад

You are a legend. Very grateful to you. I have presented the content in the exam exactly in this way. Received 7.5 in W and 7.5 in overall due to your other guides on each of the 4 modules.

@Ieltsadvantage 4 месяца назад

Well done!

@MohitSuryadevara 4 месяца назад

@@Ieltsadvantage Thank you so much !!

@RiceBall_19 3 месяца назад

This is super helpful:D tysm

@phamhuuduc215 Год назад

Thank you so much for wonderful instructions.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You are so welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@nod1r98 Год назад

Very useful video and clear to understand . Thanks a lot!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're very welcome!

@assinatania1302 6 месяцев назад

Thank u so much u help me a lot because I will pass the exam in few days

@namanchoudhary9646 5 месяцев назад

Thank you Chris for your tips . scored 8 band in writing and overall 8 band in my first attempt without even practicing once . Your tips proved to be too good . Thanks a lot once again

@Ieltsadvantage 5 месяцев назад

Congratulations!

@ngcloset Месяц назад

i have a question for the overview of this chart. in the video, the trend was determined by direction of the line (going up/down) at the end which formed the sentence "Overall, except for Estonia, all states increased in 2022." (25:59). but if i were to compare the starting point and the end, year 2008 and 2022 of Estonia (24:43 for the graph), i would say that the percentage of Estonia had actually risen from under 10% to over 10% despite the fluctuations in the middle. am i mixing things up by saying this?

@swright.89 9 месяцев назад

Sincerely thanks for useful videos, Chris. You saved me when I struggled with my writing. I just received my result this morning and I got band 7.5 overall with R 8.5 L 7.5 W 7. S 6. for my first try 🤗

@Ieltsadvantage 9 месяцев назад

Fantastic!

@bunyodboymirzayev9384 Год назад

Chris you are the best ever

@mitul_sarwar 6 месяцев назад

Loved it 😍

@kazihabiba2736 11 месяцев назад

My exam 24th of june and I couldn’t watch ur videos before today!?🤔 How excellent teacher u r Mr.Christopher! Allah bless u🤍

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

Best of luck with your test! You got this!

@Aarya___238 11 месяцев назад

How was your exam?

@saramodassar7686 Год назад

Glad to come to know such an informative channel so grateful to you and your entire team Sir. You are so genuine and trying your best to make ielts easy for students . I have to appear in ielts exams in the end of this month. Taking guidance from your videos. Remember me in your prayers.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

I"m glad you find it informative! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@mellisasanyika6930 6 месяцев назад

I struggled with Academic writing and my friend Linda Mtare shared Chris Pell 's ielts advantage link she specifically instructed me to follow all the steps he teaches on Academic writing, Chris thank you so much l finally got into band 7 was so tired of being stuck at 6.5 guys Chris is the real deal 👏

@Ieltsadvantage 6 месяцев назад

Thanks for sharing!! Congratulations!

@jamesbrendan5170 Год назад

Hello! Can this strategy be reused for other types of Task 1 Writing (e.g: bar/pie charts, tables, or even double (like a pie chart + a table) charts)? Also, will you release a new video about Map/Process Tasks?

@FuhNadeshBih 7 месяцев назад

Thank you so much Sir, I followed ur tips in speaking test and it help alot 😊

@Ieltsadvantage 7 месяцев назад

Glad to hear that! Best of luck with your scores.

@dzokainyakuvambwa5908 Год назад

Excellent presentation. I have learned a lot. Thank you

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're very welcome!

@cyprianlydia5374 Год назад

This is helpful.... thanks

@jashan_jashan0001 Год назад

Hi dear, it's really useful video, i'm your new subscriber.💜💜

@aestheticsshorts156 Год назад

Tomorrow is my test and I was worried about task 1. Thank you for this video.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Good luck!

@bharatkhatwani6701 Год назад

Bro let me know if you recd one word type questions or two word or three words please

@VeeVex 7 месяцев назад

I just had my IELTS exam today, I had almost no preparation for it, unfortunately. However, your videos helped me tremendously to learn in such a short time and I did quite good in my exam today. Thank you so much.🙏

@Ieltsadvantage 7 месяцев назад

Glad it helped! Best of luck with your scores.

@faradyba3132 Год назад

I learnt a lot from Chris. IELTS Advantage has been really helpful and I follow all the tips given and taught by Chris. I managed to improve my score in writing and speaking from 6 to 6.5 in my 2nd attempt with overall band score increased from 6.5 to 7.5. However, it's still not fulfill my requirement. I hope I can achieve band 7 for all components in my 3rd attempt soon. Thanks Chris.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Great job on improving your scores! If you need our help in preparing for your next attempt, please feel free to reach out.

@TungNguyen-hw9sq 10 месяцев назад

Thank you!!!

@kamaljeet5509 Год назад

Thanks for this video sir. you are great teacher

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You are most welcome, Kamal.

@trannguyen8956 8 месяцев назад

Thank you ❤

@yourfriend228 Год назад

This really helps me a lot as my ielts exams will be conducted tomorrow Again Thanks a lot sir!!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're very welcome. Best of luck with your test!

@vangieleacerezo5431 Год назад

very informative

@khadizarahman9834 11 дней назад

Helpful

@user-ec5hu4ki1z 7 месяцев назад

Hello there. I must say that this was the most comprehensive video on this specific topic that I have found on RU-vid. You are doing a great job. I have just started to prepare for the writing module but I don't how to get my reports evaluated to understand where I am currently standing and what's lacking in my writing. Can you kindly give some suggestions to me on how I can do it?

@Ieltsadvantage 7 месяцев назад

Hi there, we can offer you our Writing Correction Service. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!

@11_5-lethingockhanh3 Год назад

So great

@hachi9 Год назад

It's very useful for me, because I listened what I shouldn't do and what types of mistakes students tend to do. Thanks!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Glad it was helpful!

@noelelikemnicodemus8039 Год назад

I know you hear this a lot but, you're very good. You're like the GOAT of RU-vid IELTS

@motnguoiangloayhoaytuhocie9025 9 месяцев назад

Thanks for useful videos! I'm trying your best for the next Ielts test. I hope that I'll get my aim dream🤩😁🥰

@thachvo8331 Год назад

38 minutes well-spent.👍

@jamiluddin9224 5 месяцев назад

Thanks a lot ❤️❤️❤️😍

@your_life_weekly Год назад

As usual perfect teacher thank you very much

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

How do you know if the video was released 27 seconds ago? :)

@your_life_weekly Год назад

@@Ieltsadvantage couse all the time l see your video therefore l can say this point with strong confident🥰🤗😎

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@your_life_weekly Год назад

@@Ieltsadvantage :) sorry what is this I couldnʼt understand🤔🤔🤔🤔

@susanninan1 Год назад

thank you very much Sir ,i was waiting for this video

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're very welcome! Hope you find it helpful!

@susanninan1 Год назад

@@Ieltsadvantage very helpful sir and iam studying to become an IELTS trainer ..so iam expecting more video uploads ✋️

@shakilaji5570 5 месяцев назад

Thanks a lot , alot ..... Thank you very much I am grateful , No one told me these before. Much much thanks again to you🎉

@Ieltsadvantage 5 месяцев назад

You're most welcome. If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.

@shakilaji5570 5 месяцев назад

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@Ieltsadvantage 5 месяцев назад

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@akashshari Год назад

Writing just follow this man's strategy it works wonders.... Struggled in writing got my score 7.0 thanks a ton ❤

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Well done! Congratulations!

@zoya0822 11 месяцев назад

Thanks for exist.

@bodyessam8315 Год назад

Thanks ❤️❤️

@bahodirrasulov1018 Год назад

Thank u all informations were very beneficial to me

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're welcome!

@arlindanobredeceita7929 Год назад

Hello Thank you very much for this review. I hope to achieve over 7.5 bands in writing.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You are most welcome! We'd be delighted to help you achieve a Band 7.5 in Writing. We have a range of paid and free courses to suit your needs. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!

@sohibjonsuhrobov1101 6 месяцев назад

I love it

@gozalroziyeva631 Год назад

I've learned a lot. I didn't used to like writing part. But after watching this videos and infos I'm starting loving it 😃. Thank u 😍

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

That's great! If you need help with your IELTS test preparation, send us an email and we'll be happy to help.

@uchuytran9037 Год назад

This video is way to good to be free on youtube. You are great, thank you!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're very welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@user-cq7bi1qj6w Год назад

This video was so useful for me Thank you

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Glad it was helpful!

@agnesabiola1315 Год назад

I quite got you. Thanks so much sir

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're welcome, Agnes.

@aasishff5740 Год назад

Thankyou 🖤

@Jishasruchi Год назад

Amazing work 😊 Mr Chris keep going

@robertozod8526 Год назад

Hi Chris. Thanks a lot for the video. I wanted to ask if it is appropriate to say " Estonia increased...Sweden decreased..etc" while, in fact, it is the number of adults increased/decreased?