[Nijisanji] Hoshikawa's New 2.0 Model! [ENG] 

Matsuri simping so fast that she donated once before the stream even started lmao

14:15 "Face to the left and open your eyes fast" hold up someone's teaching her the way of the art schudent oh no

LMAO MATSURI SIMPING ON HOSHIKAWA AS ALWAYS ALSO THAT NEW EXPRESSION REMINDS ME OF AN ART STUDENT WHO LIKES TO STARE AT LOT AT HER AUDIENCE

Matsuri simping: 1:55

there it is. The upgrade before 3D debut. it's coming for her, I can feel it.

Now that's the good stuff. Her nose is still barely visible even when she looks to the side though lol.

I just adore her shocked face, it's soo cute

That’s some effort on the lyrics, also I really like the smug face lol.

Hi there! I see you're also a big fan of Hoshikawa, and I can tell you care about her a lot. I saw in your description that you're new to Japanese, so I thought to give you some feedback. I am by no means a professional, but I hope you take any criticism I may have as constructive. As a preface to this I’d like to add that if you haven’t already, I strongly urge that you read all Lyger’s translation/styling guides from the below link. Link- lyger.github.io/scripts/ *For now, I’ve gone through and looked for any errors I could see. Keep in mind that I’m sharing some of my personal philosophies in doing so, feel free to refute me if you feel the need. In general: For anything pertaining to the font size etc, I recommend just reading the above guide. In addition, I don’t think adding in “wwww” as laughter would be a good for a translation since it’s tied to the Japanese language. Also, generally 3rd person sounds strange in English, so using first person pronouns would flow better. There may be extremely rare occasions where it’s applicable, but I haven’t found many. Continuing, if you’re going to include punctuation be consistent on its usage as well as capitalization. Adding in hiragana/Japanese text to the subtitles are also something that I would also advise against. You used 「てんQ」for example various times, it seems strange to put into an English translation, and your audience shouldn’t be expected to be able to read it. Specifically: 0:41- ダサい means "lame" or "uncool" 1:05- The part in parentheses isn’t really needed. 1:42- This line isn’t “I’ll calm down”, she says 「ちょっと白湯飲みます。」so she’s saying she’s going to drink some hot/heated water. 3:14- I think “shit” may be too strong of a word here. 4:18- This word’s difficult to translate, the way to translate it depends on the context. Something with “close up” included could be workable. 4:29- Rather than shocked, she’s looking with upturned eyes. Sort of like puppy eyes. 5:20- For Ego Search, there’s a term called “ego-surf” you could use. Alternatively you could just say something along the lines of looking herself up on Twitter, looking at her hashtags etc. 5:56- Wakame is the name of the guy who superchatted, it’s helpful to have chat up when TLing parts of the stream to catch things like this. 6:55- If you can, translate parts where she talks about the comments, it looks strange if left out. If you need to you could also cut it out in the editing process and transition from there. 9:48- Mimetic words etc are hard to translate over in text. Instead of smug, when she’s actively doing it, using smirk would be fine. Like, * smirk * for example. 10:08- Based on what she says after, if you got rid of the brackets and said “first time superchatting” it would sound the same. 11:18- Literally it’s “green background”, but green screen may be more correct. I’d make sure to always check wasei eigo when possible. For example, 「ミス」 doesn’t mean to physically miss, but to make a mistake. 11:19- She means that she wouldn’t mind adding a green screen. Saying, “It’s fine though” may portray the opposite. 12:36- For, 「チラチラ」instead of glimpse, glance fits here. Like, “Could you glance this way?” 12:55- With the comment TLed up top the screen is a lot noisier. I don’t think it takes away a lot to not include it. Especially considering her response for context. 15:03-The Karaoke effects were honestly amazing, and I think you did great on that part! I know song translations are daunting but if you’re able to find a translation someone else has already done try translating it yourself and comparing the two. It would make that part just that much better! And it would be great practice. Lastly, there were parts you dropped lines. If you need help understanding them or if you think you mishear them there’s nothing wrong with finding help to look over it. If you use discord, I recommend the Hololive Fan discord and the 2423 Club discord. There are entire sections for translation help with people proficient in the language able to help you. They’d also be able to go over grammar and such with you too. Here’s a pastebin featuring all the links for VTuber servers if needed. Link- pastebin.com/nRayvuVP Like I said above, I’m not a pro. But these are just things I noticed and thought you may want to know. And I hope I don’t come off high handed in doing so. If you ever were to think such a thing, know it’s not my intention. With that said, have a nice day.

I was in this stream really love to see her with a lot of expressions and movements now. 3D debut when? And as always Matsuri sending a superchat well im not surprise anymore also that "GREETINGS FROM ARGENTINA" guy 😂

comment : wink! hoshikawa : *blink*

I am...surprised but a welcome one.

7:51 That accidental wink...... *HHHHNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGHHHH*

Stream just started Matsuri already sending 12k yen superchat lmfao. She looks like a fish when she does that :O mouth. I'm really curious of what came to her mind when someone asked what she plans to do for 3D.

Hoshikawa boing boing

てんQです, Translator!

"Skip if you don't want to see her suffer" Me : it can't be that bad, its prob suffer in a joking way Me after i watched it : i regret not skipping D:

"Skip to 4:12 if you don't want to see her suffer" What?! Translator, I'm sorry but, can't you see that many of us live to see this girl suffer? I appreciate the fact you put it in but I'm shocked at the fact you assume I want to skip any bit of her suffering. Thanks for the translation and hard work!

kyoot

Watching Smug EroGaki calling herself cute 30 times in 1 stream wasn't in my plans.

Thank you for making this it converted me to a whatever you call a hoshikawa follower

A New challenger for the staring contest against the Eldr--

Matsuri...

0:05 idk why, but I don't trust in that smile XD

Wait, she has two different eye color? I'm always looking at another place...THE SUBTITLES yes the subtitles...

i somehow got roa vibes from her new face

Still waiting for 3d

that 1 dislike is coming from...

She became 2.5 D i see, the other company has this kind of model as default right?

Matsuri such a simp that I learned about Hoshikawa's 2.0 model from seeing her tweet about it, which was just her screaming about hoshikawa lmfao

Matsuri is cute.

Matsuri simping XD

matsuri simping as always

Meanwhile matsuri donating 12000 yen

【 so, her new form is big face, i see *Ars wanna challenge me* 】

I can see she got the CoCo Kaine buff.

Step one me.

Kanae is still definitely more pretty

Matsuri-chan SIMPING again to Hoshikawa lmao