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Things I learned after 50 SOP reviews | 5 most common essay mistakes 

Sachin Pullil
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The statement of purpose is your opportunity to express to the admissions officers that you are a passionate, diligent, and mature student that deserves an admit. However, common mistakes in your essay can stop you from expressing yourself as such a student. In this video, I discuss the top 5 most common mistakes in a Master's, PhD, or MBA application SOP that students make so that you avoid them in your own essay.
0:00 Introduction
0:35 Platitudes
2:29 Pre-college
3:17 Classes
4:25 Resume
6:54 Career

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Комментарии : 93   
@M.m60387
@M.m60387 Год назад
why is no one talking about how cute he is. You are very intelligent too i wish you all the best in everything. Thanks for the videos
@jithinlalpradeep1396
@jithinlalpradeep1396 2 года назад
This is a great video. IT always helps to share the mistakes in SOPs rather than saying how it should be.
@sukritimacker7562
@sukritimacker7562 3 года назад
You are extremely articulate! The examples are great.. Thanks for helping out.. :)
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 3 года назад
Thanks!!
@syedanusratjahan6706
@syedanusratjahan6706 3 года назад
This is so helpful. Thanks 🙏🏻
@priyadarshinivenkatesan9111
@priyadarshinivenkatesan9111 2 года назад
Your content is very helpful, but the background music is a little louder than your actual voice tone.
@cardiyansane1414
@cardiyansane1414 2 года назад
Wow ! Amazing sir . Mine is missing that last point . Thanks so much 😊
@danishuddin9752
@danishuddin9752 Год назад
Thank you very much for the beautiful content brother. God bless you!
@brazilbella4223
@brazilbella4223 2 года назад
Such an excellent content. How did this not get a like for every view?
@harshitasachan6106
@harshitasachan6106 2 года назад
Thanks. Very helpful!
@fatemeroudini1260
@fatemeroudini1260 2 года назад
efficient and helpful. thanks.
@arunkvsp
@arunkvsp 2 года назад
Thank you very much for your tips :)
@vaibhavnageshwaran3428
@vaibhavnageshwaran3428 3 года назад
Awesome......thanks a lot....first comment....
@jhamumamaSwag
@jhamumamaSwag 2 года назад
The Jordan Peterson of Graduate Admissions! :D
@hrishikeshgondkar658
@hrishikeshgondkar658 2 года назад
I have watched a lot of videos on SOPs but not a single one is as precise a video as this one. Struck a chord right when I got stuck whilst doing the essays.
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 2 года назад
Thanks a lot!!
@anikagarg5411
@anikagarg5411 2 года назад
Also, what would you recommend if one feel the industry isn’t there in the field they wanna work in their home country and the kind of job market in that field, so that’s the reason of pursuing Masters. Would that constitute to a negative statement or it would be taken as a genuine and realistic example.
@shovahembya7989
@shovahembya7989 3 года назад
Thank you!!! 😊
@geetaawate9236
@geetaawate9236 2 года назад
How to start sop What points put in why choose university and all
@temitayoajisafe8346
@temitayoajisafe8346 Год назад
Hi. Pls I can’t seem to access the webinar in the link you put up in the description box
@himanshikapurwar203
@himanshikapurwar203 Год назад
Video is great and helped me a lot, Thanks for it but the background music is very distracting.
@mihirpatel8098
@mihirpatel8098 2 года назад
Can we mention the project we are currently working and had not been completed?
@anikagarg5411
@anikagarg5411 2 года назад
Is it right to mention the (career) aspirations job roles, company names in the SOP itself.?
@hedgehog8229
@hedgehog8229 2 года назад
Is it required to include proof of what we say in SOP. suppose i say i got certified in this, then am i supposed to attach it somewhere, or only need to give proof if they later ask to show proof ?
@yb8524
@yb8524 Год назад
Thank you thank, any advice for me I am switching phd programs and schools?
@sushmitagurung4311
@sushmitagurung4311 2 года назад
Bro what if we misspelled 'tracking instead of trekking' in my father's occupation on my SOP
@Sunshine-jd3fg
@Sunshine-jd3fg Год назад
great advices
@debeshpradhan9269
@debeshpradhan9269 3 года назад
Hi bro.. recently gave gre again..got 322...(q-168,v-154,awa-3)... toefl 94...1.3 yr experience in wipro as developer... My undergraduate degree was in a non cs/it branch.... suggest me some universities as safe, moderate for computer science. Thanks in advance.
@basitvahora3474
@basitvahora3474 Год назад
Hello @sachin i have done bsc in biotechnology and i want to study for project management what should i do
@sharansingh4956
@sharansingh4956 2 года назад
Can i mention my unvalued part time study of my diploma that I have not involved the transcripts too.
@baghermohammadzadeh9549
@baghermohammadzadeh9549 11 месяцев назад
summary of the video: 1. avoid vague platitudes(instead be as much specific as you can and avoid vague general statements) 2. avoid writing irrelevant pre-college experiences( if you mentioned this part be care that these almost outdated info are highly related to your purposes and goals.) 3. do not state bunch of courses you have taken in BA or MA (just mention relevent courses to the program) 4. state projects and experiencs related to the position or(if the experiences are irrelevant write about the skills that you have learnt from them which you can bring to this new field) 5. talk about your future career aspirations (long term and short term goals)
@bablyrai5323
@bablyrai5323 Год назад
Can you please help sop for english literature for phd
@bangalorelord7398
@bangalorelord7398 3 года назад
Hi Sachin...Can we like start the essay by talking about abacus and how that helped me be passionate about computer science? Do you feel thats relevant? Not talking abt the achievement but just mentioning it to start with
@videoentertainment12
@videoentertainment12 11 месяцев назад
How can i search for job in india package and etc for my Australia study visa SOP
@vanashreejoshi8036
@vanashreejoshi8036 Год назад
Is the SOP review portal still available?
@bhadaniaryan41
@bhadaniaryan41 Год назад
Your accent is awesome
@sriharshaananthoju8671
@sriharshaananthoju8671 2 года назад
Can we mention two specialisations
@anonymous-wi1pw
@anonymous-wi1pw 2 года назад
2:00 2:30 4:00 4:30 5:40 7:00
@amaldev8411
@amaldev8411 2 года назад
Bro I failed to sent a email because it shows this email address not found I don't know how..please help me
@shayakbhadraray9017
@shayakbhadraray9017 Год назад
Question : in terms of writing about the experience, should we describe in detail about the exact work we did or should we just name the institution / company and talk about our learnings?
@nuutiii
@nuutiii Год назад
I think a nice blend of all three. You briefly describe what you did and where you did it, you reflect on the lessons, then link back to your course (how everything motivates you to pursue the chosen course). Hope this helps :)
@shayakbhadraray9017
@shayakbhadraray9017 Год назад
@@nuutiii Thnx a lot :)
@rajashreer6887
@rajashreer6887 3 года назад
Is it recommended to give personal reasons that motivated you to apply for the course that you're apply??
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 3 года назад
Absolutely!
@TUBASMOM_official
@TUBASMOM_official Год назад
Thanks
@sbtagaming3556
@sbtagaming3556 2 года назад
Broo i just want to know does long sop gives negative impact for visa?? Though everything is genuine??
@labhsingh7221
@labhsingh7221 Год назад
I applied for malta study visa and in my sop consultant by mistakes wrote 2019 instaed of 2018 in my job experience . I also attached my my job details including appointment letter, relieving letter and salary slips in which everything is correct. I m worried b.coz sop is most important and he already submitted my sop. I m worried . Please tell me wat will happen now
@prayasratley7582
@prayasratley7582 3 года назад
should I mention in a sop the reason why my gpa is low? I met with an accident just before my finals
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 3 года назад
Yes, you should!
@rudroroy1054
@rudroroy1054 2 года назад
Hi @Sachin, I want to apply for MS in Business Analytics but my bachelor degree is in Electronics engineering, I have 4 years of experience, would be advisable to omit my B.Tech details in my sop and only state facts related to my work experiences?
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 2 года назад
Yup, you can do that no problem.
@siddharthjain3078
@siddharthjain3078 3 года назад
What if I dont have any internships or projects at all and I want to apply to phd? Is there any chance of any university ?
@lakshbk
@lakshbk 2 года назад
Messed up pretty bad huh buddy?
@khushbupatel7437
@khushbupatel7437 2 года назад
Hey sachin is there any word limit for SOP? and if i m.adding my personal experiences like my mothers illness inspired me to take this peerticular medical course..do i need to attach her medical report?
@promiseubah6118
@promiseubah6118 Год назад
This is a very useful video but the background music was too loud and distracting
@sherin7444
@sherin7444 2 года назад
I'm a mechanical graduate and wish to do masters in Artificial intelligence.Since it is not related to my stream,how should I tweak my SOP?
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 2 года назад
Discuss your career goals and why the program will help you achieve them. Then, when you talk about your past experiences, only bring up the ones where you gained transferable skills that can be applied in the field of AI or anywhere in your career.
@shiva9878
@shiva9878 2 года назад
He's!! Good
@bintabbas257
@bintabbas257 2 года назад
Hi. Can we connect ? I'm currently working on my SOP and could really use your help
@rayamajhibaradan
@rayamajhibaradan 2 года назад
Hey Sachin, as you said you are not supposed to mention your pre-school achievements in your SOP, however, is it alright if I mention them in my resume; things like awards, volunteering, scholarships, achievements, and so on?
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 2 года назад
Yes but they won't count for much
@sanashoukat6447
@sanashoukat6447 Год назад
Can we choose a different course to study in the US or do we have to choose the one we are taking for our bachelor's?
@rajatrautan5005
@rajatrautan5005 Год назад
yep, you can switch fields.
@rupikasrivastava7731
@rupikasrivastava7731 3 года назад
Why is this video not visible on your channel playlist?
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 3 года назад
It should be under all uploads haha
@dhalkifl4171
@dhalkifl4171 2 года назад
Hey, I am going to Canada for Ug. I completed my high school this year. I have only pre college achievements. What should I do ?
@rishitachakraborty9783
@rishitachakraborty9783 2 года назад
Of course, if you are applying for an undergraduate program, you will mention your pre college achievements, specifically focusing on your 4 years of High School. What he said in the video was targeted towards Master's and PhD applicants only. Since, they have experienced 3-5 years of college, it's relevant for them to mention those college achievements.
@dhalkifl4171
@dhalkifl4171 2 года назад
@@rishitachakraborty9783 Thank you so much
@abhijeetdash3516
@abhijeetdash3516 2 года назад
Hey Sachin, thanks for these precise points. I was wondering if we can get in contact as I have few doubts regarding my profile. Thanks
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 2 года назад
Yup just email us at connect@sachinpullil.com
@ramankaur1431
@ramankaur1431 2 года назад
@@SachinPullil150 hey.. in my financial ability , by mistake i have written wrong amount in bracket in words. So will this impact my canada study visa? For example: 45 ( thirty two).. will these affect.
@Urhackerr
@Urhackerr 3 года назад
Is SOP evaluation free ? I suppose not. Can you tell me what are the charges of it.
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 3 года назад
Hey Nishant, the link is in the description with all the details! I don't want to state the charges here as they may change by the time someone reads this in the future :)
@gagan_babbar
@gagan_babbar Год назад
How much do you charge to review a sop ?
@nimeshagunarathne8307
@nimeshagunarathne8307 2 года назад
Hey Sachin.. I got offer for Human resource management and marketing management.but my degree is BSc in applied sciences (computer science, mathematics statistics).I have work experience in Operations analyst feild..Is it better to accept the offer or do I need to decline it??I have overall 6 for IELTS.If I apply visa with this offer ,will it reject??
@chbnj
@chbnj Год назад
Hey! Did you make it?
@warriormindset8611
@warriormindset8611 11 месяцев назад
bro i did you become a sop reviewer?
@abhishekkaushal8223
@abhishekkaushal8223 Год назад
hi bro... is it possible if you can check my visa SOP ? it will be really helpful for me.
@Akash-ck7eg
@Akash-ck7eg 2 года назад
Hey is it okay to write ielts score in sop
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 2 года назад
I don't recommend writing any scores/GPA in your SOP since they have your transcripts/exam results.
@gargiparichha9372
@gargiparichha9372 2 года назад
forget about the SOP... I just saw your eyes.
@anjalirani5839
@anjalirani5839 3 года назад
Hi do you review SOPs on your own or you have a team.
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 3 года назад
We have a team now that takes care of it :) They're even better than I am at it haha.
@ranoldmbencho1047
@ranoldmbencho1047 2 года назад
@@SachinPullil150 hi please how do I get to you
@prashanjitdas1334
@prashanjitdas1334 Год назад
Please control your background music
@aakritivaid4352
@aakritivaid4352 Год назад
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@sushmathota3314
@sushmathota3314 3 года назад
In which university did you do your MS?
@SachinPullil150
@SachinPullil150 3 года назад
I was accepted into the University of Pennsylvania and deferred admission to Fall 21.
@anikagarg5411
@anikagarg5411 2 года назад
@@SachinPullil150 When exactly did you apply for your Masters.? Approx deadline and start of course for Fall Season.?
@sonampeldendorji2020
@sonampeldendorji2020 Год назад
Can you review my SOP for free?
@ezekielezichi2326
@ezekielezichi2326 Год назад
Thank you for such insightful information. Please, can I connect with you on LinkedIn? Again, can you help one edit SoP?
@tabegodwin917
@tabegodwin917 6 месяцев назад
great video. can i get your email address?
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