Hey guys! I thought I would add this comment in 2020 going over some of my general thoughts on this video in hindsight! As some have pointed out in the comments section, some of these entries can hardly be called ”plot twists” which is a criticism I absolutely get. Most of the entries for this list were simply chosen due to their comedic potential, though in hindsight, I definitely see that some of them may not be ”plot twists” in the general sense and I stretched the term rather thin for a few spots on the list, which was most likely not the best course of action to take. If I were to make a video like this today, I’d make sure to go out and find stories with clear-cut, defined plot twists to bring attention to. I also in hindsight feel I definitely could’ve presented myself a bit better in the video, by being calmer, as I nowadays don’t think some of the poor writing in these stories warranted such strong reactions; I feel some of my criticisms were slightly overblown. I played up some of my ”rage” for the video for comedic effect as well, just so that is clear. Obviously, my approach nowadays would be a lot different and I also urge any authors out there to keep writing and trying! Also, the author of Sonic.exe has in 2017 apologized for his initial rant regarding the story being deleted. I feel that'd be fair to point out. I don’t think someone ought to be judged forever for one bad day. Also, I am aware that Cleo is a real name; I just felt it was an interesting and obscure choice to name the character that, but apparently it’s a rather common name in America! I blame my Swedishness for that one... Just thought I ought to acknowledge these things in this little comment reflecting on this video and how some of my thoughts have evolved over time. Thank you for reading, and have a good day!
+Shifting Shadow (Originally Shadow Of Sans) No, here's the actual story Hoodo the Killer One time in a video he sang and killed everyone with his horrible singing voice. His channel was taken down because of all the deaths, but people recorded his singing before it was taken off and reposted it for others to die. The End of my trollpasta
Right when you mentioned that the protagonist was pulled into the game in the Rayman creepypasta, the video started buffering. Apparently, even RU-vid can't believe how awful that was.
"I have absolutely no problem with rape being used in a story as long as it is executed well" probably one of the worst sounding things ever when taken out of context.
I have a Creepypasta! One day a girl named Banana decided to be a killer so she shoved a nail into her forehead. Her mother told her father to get the gun and then the parents shot Banana. The end.
Secret file letter:666 Oncee upon upon a a a time, my sister told me to wash the dishes, or they'll commme for me, I nver suspected a thinh, the dishes came in my room and killed me to death, until I was dead, I am currently dead and writing this The dishes were also hyper realistic
I have a crappypasta: One time, I didn't eat a chicken nugget. Later that night, it came into my room and shot me to death with a knife, but then I had a spiritual battle with it and impaled it on a credenza.
Guys, every Trollpasta in this list is in the "Pasta Trying To Be Good When It Sucks Enough To Be A Troll" category, meaning that they were written to be taken seriously. Just thought I'd let you know.
***** Ok, I can agree with this explanation. But I still can't believe that GTA pasta with president can be in any way serious. It literally scream trollpasta! No one simply can believe in twist like that.
I think the actual GOOD creepypastas shouldn't be referred to as creepypastas, because the name sounds just as silly as the fangirl's favorites such as Jeff the Killer, Eyeless Jack, etc. What I'm trying to say here is that Psychosis and Harbringer Experiment shouldn't be called creepypastas. They deserve better names than that.
Russian Sleep Experiment, too. My personal favourite... Happy Appy just deserves the title "Funnypasta" It is creepy in some places but the ending... It was darn hilarious.
ShiningManHumz 16 here's my creepypasta: One day I is play FNaF. Freddy is jump through screen and eat my face. Blood everywhere. Herobrine fall out of sky and help Freddy. I die with diamond sword in face. The end.
One day my friend wrote a creepypasta, and he acted as if it was the best one EVER. He gets me excited. I run to his house, and here it is: sonic.the.slayer. one day I wanted to get a sonic hack. I got it but a skeleton popped out then I died. THAT WAS IT. I RAN HALF A MILE FOR THAT.
Bob Saget i got something better. One day i hyper realistically woke up from my hyper realistic bed and looked up and saw a hyper realistic ghost from my hyper realistic window and i hyper realistically punched it and hyper realistically bled and hyper realistically found out that it was just me on the mirror. I found out this is an actual story so go read that
So.... what exactly did "notifying the police" consist of? "Yeah. this guy played a game that made him shoot Obama, go an arrest him now please." "Cleo"? What kind of a name is that? Reminds me of Cleos Frey. Also, John Terry? The footballer?
I'd love to write a self insert horror fanfiction where the main character is perfect but slowly over time the supporting characters start to become self aware and sense that something is wrong with their world and that the protagonist is too unrealistic to exist. Then the focus shifts to them trying to escape their badly written hell.
This is exactly why I choose to read/listen to creepypasta's instead of creating them. I mean, don't get me wrong. Some of the well-known ones weren't that badly written. And let's be honest: they scared the heck out of me when I was a teen. But I KNOW I don't have the writing skill, nor enough knowledge of what's generally scary to contribute anything good to the community. Also, I'd have trouble thinking of any reason behind the actions of the antagonist. So no thanks: I'll just sit here, and maybe give the authors some advice on how to improve. If they haven't moved on and written something better already.
your use of Gorillaz is one reason why I really appreciate your videos, and also the fact that you're absolutely hilarious in these types of videos 0w0
Funny thing about the Ben Drowned one, the wording in the creepypasta itself proves that Jadusable may or may not be dead after the last post. Remember the line "But I guess I'm the genius who chose to live in a single?" That would mean Jadusable never had a roommate. Meaning Ben was the one who posted Jadusable's final notes. Meaning that unoffical sequel was COMPLETELY POINTLESS.
Tbh I think that the red eye keyhole hotel creepypasta plot twist sucks. Like oh no she had red eyes and was looking right at me but who gives a shit because I'm just staying at the hotel for one night ooooooooh spooooopyyyy
I love how you don't just rip at stories. You actually elaborate on why you believe they are bad stories. Also explaining that this is your opinion and everyone has their own before every video is nice.
Even better is the ''Matthew Toren died by ?'' Who even wrote that? Did someone find the journal and feel the need to write what he thought Matthew said when the monster attacked him, along with the sound effects?
"I have absolutely no problem with murder or rape in a story when it's executed well." What the media hears: "I have absolutely no problem with murder or rape."
Just wrote my first pasta. I took some of your advice Hoodo. Thank you very much! It's called 'Video drones' and it's currently on the creepypasta wiki.
I have a theory about the “play with me” ending that might make a bit more sense (emphasise on the might). The ghost at the end of the story isn’t Sally, but actually Marie (Sallys mother), who took her own life out of grief after her daughters death. When someone enters the house and approaches the vision of Sally, Marie’s ghost will kill them or drive them out, to make up for failing to protect her child when she was still alive I hope that makes sense
I played a spooky Mario hack. I'm gonna go light myself on fire and jump off a bridge while screaming Tiptoe through the Tulips at the top of my lungs. See you guys in Hell.
I'm actually fine with Play With me's plot twist. It's by no means the best plot twist ever, but I think it honestly fits because of how Ghosts in the stories are mainly spirits that have been killed so fast that they didn't see it coming so they believe they are still alive. They usually haunt people/places that they feel comfortable in/with: Sally was killed by her uncle so fast that she probably didn't even see it coming. Sally haunts her home, somewhere she felt comfortable in because her family and friends had lived there.
i think the greatest part of time travel journal, isn't the incoherent plot, the grammar errors or any of that. it's that the character took the time to write out his own death rattle as what ever was killing him.
#1 sounds like it was written by someone young or someone with English as a second language. Or both. Oh well, at least they're trying to write. I hope they practice and get better. All of these guys should. If they like writing, I hope they continue to pursue it and improve. Practice makes perfect. :3
I have been writing since I was in 8th grade, and though I have never written a creepypasta, I can say that I have improved since then. So keep writing and also read a lot. It will definitely help you improve. And to think, I started it all writing Kim Possible fanfiction.
do... was.... the last one.... was it a real attempt at something scary...? because, i mean, if it was, then it succeeded. im horrified to know that there is at least one person out there who thinks... that... was "scary"
Heres a creepypasta I once read: "Once upon a time I looked for a spyro bootleg game, then a game called spyro bootleg appeared in my mail, then I died." Seriously. Im not kidding, that was the whole creepypasta. Edit: pizza pasta put it in a box
+Bananawolf 64 Heres one I'll make for no apparent reason, once there was a guy named Gaye Wright, he tried to get revenant sub zero in mkx, by the time he had gotten to the fifth wave his hands had already become bloody pulps, in his rage he spend his college money (all of it.) buying a poorly made revenant sub zero costume, in the presidential meeting of whoever was a president, is a president or wants to be a president he appeared via his cloak and dagger he bought in a trade for a hat, then suddenly he held Obama hostage with his hales own pretty boys pistol gun, quickly thinking, Donald Trumps hair said in public chat: whoever kills revenant sub zero at the meeting gets 10 beta keys, suddenly, endless waves and hordes of toons rushing from their vps come and give the revenant sub zero guy a spanking, then they spam that they have 10 beta keys each on toonbook, suddenly an army of dedodated wams approach, in retaliation han solo appears and does the star wars kinect han solo dance.
Well in that 666 story you gotta remember that English aint exactly the Devil's original language. Latin has been going downhill though, about time he learns English. ...Im joking if y'all didnt notice. That was a terrible story.
I know this is an older video, but I've got ti say it: stories like Clockwork are typically what you get when a story is written to justify an edgy character design or vague edgy concept, rather than designing a character around a thought out story.
I just love your reaction on 'Cleo the Killer' and 'BEN II' I agree that those stories made no sense, but I just laughed when you did these stories. Also, I hope you got your sanity back after making this video
