twilight was plagiarized? | breaking down the bizarre plagiarism scandal

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@poipiku4875 4 месяца назад

can't believe pulitzer prize winning youtuber uncarley also wrote shawshank redemption. she is so talented we have to stan

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

this is all so true

@blueblack3591 4 месяца назад

😂😂😂😂

@bigpuff2480 4 месяца назад

I was going to comment something similar. She is so amazing cause I'm pretty sure she was a baby when she wrote that! 🤣

@catalinam36 4 месяца назад

Imagine that you study your ass off in Law school just to be a judge in a case where you have to decide if Breaking Dawn was plagiarized or not

@ana-nim 4 месяца назад

Tbh kinda iconic. It's a historical event i would say

@detergenthwachae 4 месяца назад

straight on my CV

@patriciahernandez2719 4 месяца назад

Sounds good enough. Highkey this gave me the motivation to keep studying law 😂😂😂😂

@catalinam36 4 месяца назад

@@ana-nim I know, right? But it's just so funny to me 🤣

@Dumpknoedel 4 месяца назад

peanuts compared to the omegaverse lawsuit

@Vampress09 4 месяца назад

The fact that she called "sex scene after marriage" plagiarism is sending me.

@blugreen123 4 месяца назад

Same. I simply cannot. 😂

@timberlyncarthins6096 4 месяца назад

And bleeding after child birth💀

@LilyEvans1996 4 месяца назад

The male character professes his love for the female character

@anniee5487 4 месяца назад

ive copyrighted the concept of having sex on your honeymoon

@manband20 4 месяца назад

@@LilyEvans1996 Not only that, but calling your S/O "love" has never been done before. Pack it in, kindly British moms, you're going to court soon.

@persia888 4 месяца назад

As a mental health professional, I’ve noticed that one of the most common delusions people have is that someone stole their idea/book/script/song etc… I’ve heard this story a million times.

@dismurrart6648 4 месяца назад

Lmao that's so wild.

@XOChristianaNicole 4 месяца назад

This is why it’s SO important for if someone has an idea, such as a script or whatever - to write it down, mail themselves a copy, and never open it. That way, they have physical proof and time stamp of when they came up with the idea. However, also.. Quantum entanglement is very real, and people, often, get the same/similar ideas, at around the same time (there are even incidents in history, where patent were submitted on the same day, for the same design - and the people lived half way across the world from each other, and had never met). However, having that piece of mail has the potential to solve some legal problems, depending on the circumstances - in regards to providing if someone copied another or not. I learned this when I was pursing working in entertainment.

@bekichan91 4 месяца назад

@@XOChristianaNicole mailing a copy for proof purposes works only to prove that you have the original version of a work - you cannot copyright an idea James Cameron's Avatar follows the same storyline as Disney's Pocahontas, but it's execution was different enough to be safe, there's no actual verbatim lines taken from Pocahontas, and no one would mistake the two.

@monkimallow 3 месяца назад

The closest I have come to this is writing the beginning of a book and someone telling me it was similar to the vampire diaries and me abandoning it and finding out it was very not the same xD

@seabreeze4559 3 месяца назад

it's been called character trait acquisition by HG Tudor

@ladygaygay94 4 месяца назад

I love learning niche Twilight lore from the most unhinged girly pop on YT

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

omg thank u

@goonrag 4 месяца назад

Realistically carley is one of the most hinged girly pops on here

@angelikaalsen 4 месяца назад

carley where the hell have you been loca

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

of course mommy

@MilkChocolateGeese 4 месяца назад

in bed playing stardew valley depressed!!!

@amelia_mimi6153 4 месяца назад

Hachette calling The Nocturne a "supposed book" in their statement (12:15) is SENDING ME even though I know it's probably just lawyer language

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

the dunk of the century

@mina_nihad 4 месяца назад

I WAS LOOKING FOR A COMMENT ABOUT THIS

@jaginaiaelectrizs6341 3 месяца назад

It's lawyer language for the fact that they were not personally sent a copy of this book submitted into evidence to look over with their own two eyes. And it's not readily available in print on shelves in stores or such. Lol

@mary5305j 3 месяца назад

Supposed book because we can’t even find it 😂 we need to find itttt

@jaginaiaelectrizs6341 3 месяца назад

@@mary5305j I found a pdf online, but youtube doesn't allow commenting links. 😂

@bro.that.is.adorable.2633 4 месяца назад

Howling at the Twilight wedding being “every Pinterest wedding” bc this couldn’t be more accurate

@Beeslaughter 4 месяца назад

Direct attack against me because I made a Pinterest board *about* the twilight wedding 😭😭😭😭😂😂😂😂😂

@Mmhmpeanutbutter 3 месяца назад

@@Beeslaughterthe missiles are locked on your location

@youknowlikealiar1300 4 месяца назад

I just checked Scott's goodreads and not only did they take credit for writing the screenplay of A Simple Favor and The Perks of Being a Wallflower, but also for The Maze Runner, Pitch Perfect and among many others...the first Twilight movie. Truly unhinged

@RamonaGelosi 4 месяца назад

whaaaatttt

@alexdavis360 4 месяца назад

its giving cray cray

@averyfilmsstuff 4 месяца назад

Tick Tick Boom too

@dshank536 4 месяца назад

@@averyfilmsstuff OK the delusions must be delusion-ing because there’s no way this person took credit for an autobiography of someone else

@averyfilmsstuff 4 месяца назад

@@dshank536 its actually bonkers i highly recommend browsing her goodreads

@AceWolf456 4 месяца назад

As someone who also has seasonal depression, there is one good thing about it. Only one though. It's official name is Seasonal Affective Disorder, shortened to SAD. So we get to say shit like "I have the big SAD."

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

oh BIG SAD

@brookeworm18 4 месяца назад

forever calling this season the big SAD. thank you!

@samf.s.7731 4 месяца назад

As someone who's suffering form the effects of blood loss anemia, I have a big SAD too 😢

@tsuki3752 4 месяца назад

Big Sad is taking over our government … 😂

@anisa2273 4 месяца назад

i have SAD too... i feel so SAD now

@Lppt87 4 месяца назад

The judge had to read both books to decide, horrible, poor victim.

@amytobias4 4 месяца назад

honestly this is like if 18 year old me took Kathleen Kennedy to court after watching the rise of skywalker because when I was 10 I wrote a whole headcanon where palpatine had a daughter and granddaughter because I was fed up of the lack of women characters lmao

@jaginaiaelectrizs6341 3 месяца назад

Only if you actually publicly published it somewhere!😂

@yasyreyes6785 4 месяца назад

I was able to name a different movie for every “reason” that was listed for infringement. “Character turns into vampire?”, “mother looks at newborn baby?” I’m surprised, one of them wasn’t “boy falls in love with girl” 😂

@alexdavis360 4 месяца назад

or the biggest one - 'main character is not like other girls'

@Vamp-kun 4 месяца назад

Or, the teenage girl protagonist goes to school!!!

@jaginaiaelectrizs6341 3 месяца назад

Yes, but how many movies could you name with all of the reasons in one movie? 🤔 (I'm genuinely curious, I feel like there has to be at least one!😂😂)

@briannacox4878 2 месяца назад

YES same!! "woman is sick because pregnant with child who has evil powers" is literally Rosemary's Baby, which was made in the 60s!! or it's a general thing that happens a lot in real life, especially the ones having to do with pregnancy. this lawsuit was crazy

@leiaissleepy2576 4 месяца назад

It’s almost remarkable how committed you are to not making eye contact with the camera

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

ADHD is my superpower

@EvaWhoDraws 4 месяца назад

honestly I appreciate it because I also hate eye contact

@ashtaylor4107 3 месяца назад

LOL I didn’t even notice 😂 both of us avoiding imaginary eye contact

@oztippetarius 19 дней назад

Honestly that's just a good sign that she's not a sociopath

@alexnicole6806 4 месяца назад

I’m a simple woman: I see Carley, I click. I see Carley AND Twilight, I order food and make it an EVENT.

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

omg this is such a vibe

@maddiebeth_o 4 месяца назад

Not me sitting here eating the Taco Bell I ordered specifically to watch this video lmao

@murrzzz 4 месяца назад

Jordan Scott talking about her ability to be a model and make an album is giving such Kendall Jenner energy and I cannot fully explain why

@juand1rection 4 месяца назад

I can’t believe Jordan Scott would try to see the author of Twilight, Tommy Tallarico

@taylorose 4 месяца назад

having sex on the wedding night is totally never done before.... and getting sick while pregnant is so unique! Also who calls their wife "love".... imagine HAVING to pay thousands of dollars to deal with writing a book about this...

@daybreakhorizon2513 4 месяца назад

The fact that Hachette called The Nocturne a “supposed book” 💀💀💀

@nithyanair1906 4 месяца назад

“Wow. I love school, writing, music, and of course Boys” is honestly the motto that I try to live up to. Jordan Scott is so inspiring!

@calebarsenault382 4 месяца назад

If you scroll down further on her goodreads, she claims to have contributed to the screenplays for Pitch Perfect; The Maze Runner; Tick, Tick... Boom; Trainwreck; a bunch of Coen brother films; Sing 2; Oculus; Atomic Blond; and the Making Coloring Great Again: the Political Coloring Book

@thecavalieryouth 4 месяца назад

Oh wow 😳 And Tick Tick, Boom is a very recent one, so Jordan is somehow *still* on their bullshit. Incredible.

@anisa2273 4 месяца назад

@@thecavalieryouth so is Sing 2... crazy

@c.w.8200 4 месяца назад

So...mental health issues maybe?

@youresoartdeco1 4 месяца назад

she strikes again with the most relevant topics thank you queen

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

anytime bestie!

@kayleejazz1669 4 месяца назад

I like your thumbnail. I think I recognize it from a movie or something? If you don’t mind me asking where you got it. Lol.

@youresoartdeco1 4 месяца назад

@@kayleejazz1669 tbh i just found it on pinterest but i looked it up to tell you where it's from and apparently it's ai generated, but it does look very familiar and has the general style of 90s anime

@jarrodbooth4896 4 месяца назад

Jordan Scott is also the name of the "I ain't ever seen two pretty best friends" guy who was viral a few years ago and if that doesn't tell us this goes all the way to the top I don't know what does

@_Amanda_Lynn 4 месяца назад

You needn't say more!

@Brookemarie207 4 месяца назад

I found the book on Amazon used for $68 which is honestly a steal for the amount of history it has

@rosierose8549 4 месяца назад

Its at $163 now 😂

@deepanjalisingh8427 4 месяца назад

Only mother Carley deserves podcast mic privileges

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

thank u

@ajmarsh99 4 месяца назад

imagining jordan scott sitting in this interview and saying things like "the husband having to cut the baby out" completely straight-faced is SENDING ME BABE PLS

@show-me-orion 4 месяца назад

Honestly “her supposed book” is just so funny to me. Like, her book made such little impact that it may just not even exist. Incredible

@francescakyanda9182 4 месяца назад

Everyone else is following the Harvard plagiarism scandal like this isn’t where the real tea is

@emilyshepherd2190 4 месяца назад

“I wrote shawshank, I love prison!” Had me crying with laughter 😂

@jessicasingh6892 4 месяца назад

I think I found the nocturne on Amazon? It has a 3/5 rating from 10 reviews, and it retails for 68.17. The description reads: “In war-torn, late medieval France, an ill-fated sorcerer must surrender his soul after tragedy strikes, and afterward struggle against his own power - in a future that has long been foretold - to redeem himself before being separated from his true love forever...” it says it’s by Jordan Scott and the reviewers all mention Twilight?

@Lizzie_04 4 месяца назад

Perfect random gym video to listen to

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

oh this is such a compliment

@itsheliotrope 4 месяца назад

Carley is correct its pronounced Meyers, the s is always printed in invisible ink

@kelsqi-books4835 4 месяца назад

The "Meyer" vs "Meyers" thing is extra funny to me, whose maiden name is "Myers". I spent a lot of time correcting people that neither of those options were right 😅❤

@kaylamatters 4 месяца назад

JRR Tolkien laying claim to the hero’s journey TOOK ME OUT and also took me back to freshman year advanced English 😂

@funeralpyreee 4 месяца назад

about halfway through this so idk if you’ve talked about it but in terms of copyright drama: there’s this woman who is trying to claim ownership of characters who have sun powers.

@mesmoe-rizing 4 месяца назад

I DEVOURED my soup while watching this. It was like sitting across from a friend at lunch as they told you all the tea.

@bunnyfrosting1744 4 месяца назад

What kind of soup ??? I need inspo

@bookshelfhoney 4 месяца назад

@@bunnyfrosting1744 Idk what kind of soup they had but I just made some Thai red curry coconut chicken soup and it's pretty great 🔥

@TheSoftestGirlYouKnow 4 месяца назад

OH MY GOODNESS ME TOO!!!! I wish we could upload photos to show each other our soups.

@spicymapo_tofu 4 месяца назад

"I am sexy, sexy Sherlock Holmes." Iconic.

@alexisisartsy 4 месяца назад

every time you post it adds 20 years to my life 🙏🏼🙏🏼 thank you for rejuvenating us

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

happy to help!

@Man-ej6uv 4 месяца назад

wait it's not meyers?!??? treason

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

RIGHT!!?

@edenashkenazi7609 4 месяца назад

"supposed book" is a savage phrase

@georgiashuttleworth6503 4 месяца назад

I’d really like to know her thought process when choosing movies like a simple favor and perks of being a wallflower. Those movies are so drastically different😭

@dismurrart6648 4 месяца назад

Probably just things she liked

@caitlinrichardson5876 4 месяца назад

my mom told me to wash her crockpot- i informed her carley just posted, the crockpot has to wait

@Thepeanutcollector 4 месяца назад

Have you checked again? It might be on fire rn

@suealexwright2974 4 месяца назад

This is like the omegaverse lawsuit’s younger sister, I love it

@demonchildmina 4 месяца назад

when carley said "because im human. just like you." it felt like a threat

@julieannelovesbooks 4 месяца назад

I am just worried about this woman’s mental health. 21 is a really normal onset for things like schizophrenia. I wholeheartedly believe that there’s something actually wrong with her.

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

i do not want to doxx her but if you really look into her life she is happy now and successful in her field (which im not gonna say but if you google around enough u can find it) alls this to say that in the end she is seemingly thriving

@julieannelovesbooks 4 месяца назад

@@uncarley I really really hope so. I want the best for people in general, even if they were absolutely unhinged in their early 20’s.

@syddlebyddle12 4 месяца назад

I just started the video and I TRULY thought you were talking about Carley for a hot second

@julieannelovesbooks 4 месяца назад

@@syddlebyddle12 who said it wasn’t about Carley?🤪😂

@angelalovell5669 4 месяца назад

Bit of a stretch to jump from plagiarism accusation to schizophrenia.

@brookeworm18 4 месяца назад

i’m sitting down to binge the twilight series and I see this first thing. tell me a better way to start the marathon than an iconic carley video

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

YESSS

@cal6137 4 месяца назад

i'm so glad i wasn't paying attention until like. 2015 . i now get to hear all of this drama after it and i have developed

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

same bestie

@seafoampudding 4 месяца назад

"late night with stephanie meyers" has incredible potential to be an intrusive thought of mine for the next several months i fear

@LittleDogTobi 4 месяца назад

Love your username and icon :)

@Vamp-kun 4 месяца назад

As an Edward roleplayer in Twilight readathons in my village, I have to admit, nobody ever discussed that plagiarism issue. First time I ever hear about this unhinged interview! Interesting information by the way, you got yourself a subscriber 🦇 Ps: Did you know that Carley reminds me of I Carly? Good series...

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

oh my god twilight readathons??

@monique_wangra 4 месяца назад

Can we please come back to the fact that you had twilight readathons?????

@turkicnomad5632 4 месяца назад

No no we need to go back to Edward roleplay.

@detergenthwachae 4 месяца назад

You're in for a wild ride, new subscriber... when I subscribed, I watched back like 40 videos to make sure I know all the inside jokes lmao

@Vamp-kun 4 месяца назад

@uncarley @monique_wangra Yes. I voiced Edward's lines while one of the other folks (usually the least vampire friendly and more of a Teen Wolf guy) would voice Jacob's. Usually my best lady friend had Bella's lines. Relationship goals :P @turkicnomad5632 I didn't look like Edward but since we were vampy folk ever since the vampire diaries books, and the Twilight movies didn't reach us until 2010, nobody minded. Also, 2015 was my favorite year ever. I got to roleplay Beaufort Swan, but I preferred Bella's more eloquent words. Beaufort's lines seemed like a Percy Jackson novel...

@sofiaacevedo2371 4 месяца назад

I'm not even a twilight fan, i just love knowing niche drama

@liliansoaresdias1297 4 месяца назад

" the main character reffers to his WIFE as love " well, that's very unique

@TheRayquaza11 4 месяца назад

I feel like I have the unhinged necessity to say at an interview that I model and that I don't need to model. But I am a model.

@emilyfiles7013 4 месяца назад

i can't believe you took a break from stardew just to post a video on my birthdayyyyy! no other reason! that's so kind

@yviedesautels8051 4 месяца назад

happy birthday!!!

@kit922 4 месяца назад

Happy birthday 🎉🎉🎉🎉

@veronicag4789 4 месяца назад

At some point it was actually turned into a very oddly formatted ebook so if you explore the high seas it's not hard to get your hands on a copy. She started the story when she was 15 and it's written in first person but it switches to a different character each chapter. So it's an...experience

@ghosttrain9022 4 месяца назад

Breaking DAWN the insane plagiarism scandal

@moonyfruit 4 месяца назад

Scott doesn't understand that plagarism and unoriginality are not the same thing. :'D

@heartsownblood 4 месяца назад

i was rewatching the midnight sun drama video last night so this is thee most perfect timing for this video

@Backtheblueorleave 4 месяца назад

You said sexy sexy Sherlock Holmes and I immediately subscribed😂😂😂

@lilypadrg5750 4 месяца назад

When you say at 21 you’re at your peak unhinged behavior GIIRRLL I felt it in my soul I’m 23 only two years since 21 and let me tell you I was so unhinged for no fcking reason like (??? I am back to normal but it left scars haha 😂❤

@caixucook3 3 месяца назад

The actual court documents at least are easy to find online and funny as shit

@svetlanasolos 4 месяца назад

my mom used know her middle school and i asked her about jordan and she said that she used to push down chairs for no reason

@gabi.9959 4 месяца назад

carley i’m addicted to watching ur videos while doing cardio at the gym so my fitness journey is basically in ur hands

@Dietcokeangel 4 месяца назад

Ive been binging your channel for like 24 hrs. Thank you. ❤

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

omg so kind thank u!

@angie3502 4 месяца назад

But the title could’ve been Breaking Dawn the plagiarism scandal

@ygmrt 4 месяца назад

Can't believe I've never heard of this before! Thank you Carley for informing us on this historical event

@Annesakae 4 месяца назад

Thank you for this journalism I loved it ❤❤

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

putting my 2 years in journalism school to good use

@saritakurth1061 4 месяца назад

HAPPY CARLEY POSTED DAY

@autisticz 4 месяца назад

i love how insane you are im so serious you’re my inspiration

@weebamcentire28 4 месяца назад

Is misleading a judge into thinking that passages from both books are more similar than they are in the actual texts not perjury?

@ITzMillennialMomPlays 3 месяца назад

Not just Twilight, but the Host as well. There was an older book at my ex boyfriend's house that belonged to his mother that she let me borrow. For the life of me, I cannot remember the name of it, but it was almost 1:1 with the Host, with slight changes to the names of the characters and the alien races. I thought it was strange, so i asked my exes' mom about it, and she said it was a pretty common thing for bigger name authors to buy out books/plots of stories that flopped long before to publish them under their name for modern audiences.

@Reeseskitty 4 месяца назад

I really hope you keep doing the twilight watch alongs! I can’t make this one, but I really want to catch one !!

@jito7377 4 месяца назад

Twilight shout along sounds awesome. Keep going girly❤

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

it is so much fun!! thank u

@sonee_moon 4 месяца назад

I love you and Cindy. The way my world rattled..

@catchthesehans 3 месяца назад

As someone in Toronto, I'm absolutely DEVASTATED I'm viewing this four weeks later and missed the hot docs event! I hope you do something similar again in the future :D

@melaniegonzalez8316 4 месяца назад

my day is immediately better once you post

@Zoe_Coles 4 месяца назад

Finding out Carley is a Cindy stan has been the highlight of my week.

@Nunurbusinessp 4 месяца назад

1:25 not you calling me out for EXACTLY what I had planned to do today 😂

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

naurr

@121violeta 4 месяца назад

¡Gracias por tanto Carley!

@Neriadea 4 месяца назад

literally in my stardew and rot era, who gave you the right to be so relatable

@parultayenjam8512 4 месяца назад

I live for this kind of content. Thank you!

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

omg amazing!

@Mina-dq6pn 4 месяца назад

carley upload days r my fav days tbh

@Kristinattv 4 месяца назад

unrelated to the video but i need a skincare/makeup routine bc you look so radiant

@shakedamram1313 4 месяца назад

I've never in my life clicked faster on a video in my life, I love your Pop Culture commentary 🤌🏻

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

thank you bestie!

@MageKiton 4 месяца назад

Love this video! The thumbnail is fantastic and is giving Kubrick's Stare but from a Pachycephalosaurus. Like I'm about to get head-butted into oblivion.

@tophtopherson8920 4 месяца назад

I have no idea about this story! just starting your video now, very excited. you are hilarious and delightful❤

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

thank you!

@slut4whiteboys 4 месяца назад

first btw i love your videos so much you’re so funny and you always make my day ❤

@uncarley 4 месяца назад

omg thank you!!

@Taylor-xj9nv 4 месяца назад

Absolutely lost it at the edit of you up to bat in twilight 😂😭

@justabookishreader 3 месяца назад

have never watched or read *any* twilight stuff, and this vid just randomly came up. Best way to be introduced to a channel ever

@awfulwoman 4 месяца назад

So what I'm taking away from this story is that a former gifted-kid prodigy could not conceive that their romance book, which was only noteable for having been completed when they were 14, was actually very generic and unoriginal when held to the standards of the grown-up publishing industry. Relatable hubris tbh

@princembat 2 месяца назад

i think its beyond funny that this person really said 'i own these common tropes that a lot of romance stories have! also no you cant read my book btw!' no one owns tropes lmao itd be depressing if people did

@arden3544 4 месяца назад

the stardew valley comment floored me because i was just queueing up my stardew world as you said that

@DeadmansHellebore 3 месяца назад

I own two nocturne books. It’s a series of different books by different authors. The publishing company is Harlequin. I don’t own Jordan Scott’s but I do own one by Jenna Kernan and one by Karen Whiddon