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First impressions last. The opening image of your screenplay is your reader’s entry into the world you’re crafting. If you can hook your audience from page one, it gives them confidence in reading the rest of your script.
In this video, Scott teaches you the intention and effect behind the opening of your screenplay and how to keep your audience engaged.
Here’s what’s coming up:
• The goal of the first page of your screenplay. Setting up the story, tone, and characters.
• Different styles of opening images and ways to incorporate imagery.
• Real movie and TV examples to learn from. What’s working and why.
Over to You:
• Ask yourself, are my first few pages eye-catching? How can I improve?
• What do you think of Scott’s methods outlined in this video?
Let us know in the comments section below the video.
Resources:
• You can read and download the mentioned scripts here:
KING OF STATEN ISLAND:
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ANIMAL KINGDOM:
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THE JOKER:
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Комментарии : 33   
@josepablolopovich4803
@josepablolopovich4803 2 месяца назад
THANKS FOR ALL YOUR SUPPORT !!!! I DO LIKE PROFOUNDLY THE WAY YOU EXPRESS YOUR SELF !!!!!!! SALUDOS DE MEXICO MY FRIEND !!! GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS !!!!!!!
@gregoryhardee2641
@gregoryhardee2641 3 года назад
I’m 2/3 of the way through my third script when I saw this. Stopped go forward to inspect the last pages line. Having a ball playing with adjusting them. Great fun. Thanks for all the tips!
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Hi Gregory, that's great to hear! Most importantly, we love that you had fun with it. More helpful videos to come!
@marklerux9923
@marklerux9923 Год назад
it sounds class writing ,it could go the right way....
@joyvastola4654
@joyvastola4654 3 года назад
Scott, Once again, love this video. These little videos you are doing really really help. You have given me cover twice on two of my scripts, and, of course, you know how much I appreciated that. But, these little videos are great. I now have to go back and revisit my first pages. Thanks again. Please keep these videos coming. And, on a side note, sending out a horror script to you soon...I am sure you will be happy to hear it is not another Rom/com. lol. Thanks again, Joy
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Hi Joy, awesome! We love to hear that you have found Scott's coverages helpful on a few of your projects, as well as these videos. Our Pros like Scott are dedicated to both educate and inspire in any shape and form. Have a great day!
@bobwoodssr.4683
@bobwoodssr.4683 3 года назад
Hey Scott, Another Home Run! The last line should be good enough to lead the reader to page two without him knowing it. That's Gold! I should have thought of that myself, but didn't. It won't happen again...Thanks!
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Glad you enjoyed the video Bob! We appreciate you watching. More to come!
@joannetriviz8471
@joannetriviz8471 3 года назад
Love the video! Going back to read the first pages again...
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Hi Joanne, we hope you are excited to revisit your first pages with this new, fresh perspective. Stay inspired!
@junkybabes
@junkybabes 3 года назад
the dogs bollocks of screenwriting classes... the examples really help. cheers
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Glad you found the examples helpful!
@onethdasanayake3689
@onethdasanayake3689 3 года назад
Amazing work, love it!
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Thank you Oneth. We will continue to post new videos at least once a week, so make sure to subscribe if you haven't already!
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu 6 месяцев назад
Cheers, bruh !!!
@writestuffla
@writestuffla 3 года назад
Fabulous analysis.
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 2 года назад
Glad you think so, Jim!
@onuohaudochukwu6180
@onuohaudochukwu6180 3 года назад
Thanks for sharing!
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
It's our pleasure. Thanks for watching!
@EvanGamble
@EvanGamble 3 года назад
This is very helpful!
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Glad you think so Evan!
@markconstable100
@markconstable100 3 года назад
Thank you.
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Thanks for watching!
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Thanks for watching!
@robmenzies2003
@robmenzies2003 3 года назад
Love your videos, Scott. What camera and microphone are you using.
@ProScreenplays
@ProScreenplays 3 года назад
Thanks for watching and commenting! I use a standard lapel mic, and the camera is an iPhone 8+.
@MrTonystar1
@MrTonystar1 2 года назад
Just want to say that I found your spec script sample the most helpful, as it was written in that style, one similar to my own and you stacked the description. The other scripts, yes, were indeed descriptive and evoked emotion. It did seem that they telegraphed some of the atmosphere and were somewhat word-heavy in layering what was telegraphed. And... long paragraphs. Your own was long as well, but description stacked on description. Read better, in my opinion.
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 2 года назад
Thanks for the great feedback Tony!
@edwardweems
@edwardweems 3 года назад
I was hoping you would address the movie, Slum Dog Millionaire, effectively uses flashbacks although the movie consisted almost entirely of flashbacks.
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles
@ScriptReaderProLosAngeles 3 года назад
Yes, Slumdog Millionaire is a great example too, and wonderful film!
@nickp7069
@nickp7069 Год назад
Only just stumbled across this video. My take is the King Of Staten Island is a terrible example of first page. The opening scene description should be INT. CAR…. or how do we see he’s visibly upset while driving on a road as the camera would be set up EXT. ROAD…. Also, the double use of ‘driving’ and ‘eyes’ in the short slug line don’t instill confidence the writer will be the most verbose, surely the first page if any is the best place to at least use a few synonyms….
@ColinCollard
@ColinCollard 4 месяца назад
The “first page” of your presentation was like a bad first page of a script. You rambled on and on about why a first page is important. Why didn’t you simply lead with a first page from one of the scripts? That way you would have got my attention right away. Afterwards you could have followed it up with why it was good, huh?
@bluerabbit1236
@bluerabbit1236 3 месяца назад
How's that an exterior road scene when someone is in the car driving 😂 What about the present continuous tense? All that telling and no showing 😬 And you are saying this is a great scrip? No professional who sees that will read further. It's okay when Judd Appatow does it. It's NOT okay when a no name amateur does it. People who have never sold anything teaching amateurs a bunch of nonsense and they're all buying this bs.
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