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@Vol4Life1962
@Vol4Life1962 5 месяцев назад
Listening to these stories for about a week. I have lost count of the number of times I have heard the Fate of the Galaxy hangs in the balance. LOL.
@sarttee
@sarttee 5 месяцев назад
because its all a.i generated...
@FlaviusAspra
@FlaviusAspra 5 месяцев назад
And "A beacon of hope"
@ErisstheGoddessofmanhwas
@ErisstheGoddessofmanhwas 5 месяцев назад
Soooo?
@sizemore216
@sizemore216 5 месяцев назад
And “his sidearm drawn”
@kiltmaster7041
@kiltmaster7041 5 месяцев назад
@@sizemore216 *followed by a clinical and flavourless description of the precise measurements of a Glock 9mm.*
@chadrowin2956
@chadrowin2956 5 месяцев назад
He was told to destroy the broken ancient remains of the fleet and erase all data concerning its existence. And then when he returns to his ship, suddenly he knows about an incomplete super weapon that has not yet been mentioned? Seems like we are missing part of the story here.
@fberdf
@fberdf 5 месяцев назад
And the Kredox were a myth and suddenly are everywhere ?
@koshe86
@koshe86 5 месяцев назад
@@fberdf and they destroyed the human fleet then it was a new race at the end.
@ravenof1985
@ravenof1985 5 месяцев назад
its AI written, there are contradictions/omissions everywhere
@fberdf
@fberdf 5 месяцев назад
@@ravenof1985No, there are a lot of AI written stories over here, but usually we just get some expressions and words repeatead over and over again, not so many omissions and contradictions like this one. I must have seen in the last 2 months 80 videos like this and this is the most broken of them all.
@PaulBrannan-mb8wv
@PaulBrannan-mb8wv 5 месяцев назад
Or how the kradox knew what they just found. Big big big gaps of this story
@LoganJohnson-lm2bh
@LoganJohnson-lm2bh 5 месяцев назад
It is rare that i would sit and listen to a story teller at all even one like this as i have loved Sci fi all my life and have amassed a library of more than a 1,000 books in my life but i must admit i was drawn in to this one .well done sir .
@jbrobertson6052
@jbrobertson6052 5 месяцев назад
Hey I did the same thing I was born in 1960 and my Uncle was an All Star Wrestler back in the day with Gene Kiniski and Steve Little Bear those are the names that I remember but those guys and more of them had I guess you would call a little comic book club they all bought comic books and amongst themselves they bought every comic book that was printed that month and shared them amongst each other and then they would give them to me I was one lucky kid who ended up with hundreds and hundreds of them and before I was 6 I was reading Sci-Fi and once Star Trek started in 66 I was hooked lol. This video came on and I thought it was a movie but when I realized it was a story I was going to put something else on and by the time I found something I had been listening and I was hooked lol
@Wateringman
@Wateringman 4 месяца назад
Then you will have a treat with Perry Rhodan: Peacelord of the Universe. Over 5,000 novels. Mostly in German though. It's translated; but English it's limited.
@Wolfen443
@Wolfen443 5 месяцев назад
Ah, that is like the discovery of The Shadows and the coming out of the Vorlons in Babylon 5.
@snoobahjj2089
@snoobahjj2089 5 месяцев назад
Ah man of culture i see, good old Babylon 5 series
@sullyway51
@sullyway51 5 месяцев назад
I really liked this story . I agree that this would make a great movie or even better, a mini-series.
@haydenhelton6852
@haydenhelton6852 5 месяцев назад
I'm surprised they were able to do as good as they could with the mass of leaks that allowed the enemy to get all the information they needed
@lechatrelou6393
@lechatrelou6393 5 месяцев назад
War thunder, spatial edition
@tonynelligan1930
@tonynelligan1930 5 месяцев назад
maybe it's the drugs but did they evacuate the ship twice? got lost somewhere.
@stratometal
@stratometal 5 месяцев назад
Yup, seems like that bit repeated itself. A copy paste/edit error?
@TairnKA
@TairnKA 5 месяцев назад
It sounds like multi-drafts of the story got accidently edited in an odd order? Ah, s*** happens. ;-) In the first part they used a shuttle and drop ships, then they had transporters. Don't talk, shoot! Where did the data go that you had? One moment it seemed they were making peace with their enemy's, they find the Human and their back waring. Someone was in a hurry to publish this and sounds like they didn't proof read it?
@chkmcgee
@chkmcgee 5 месяцев назад
Sounds like a mental narrative of what the commander expected to happen.
@ravenof1985
@ravenof1985 5 месяцев назад
its AI written, there are contradictions/omissions everywhere
@apolloxiii5574
@apolloxiii5574 5 месяцев назад
Sounds like a story with multiple timeloops
@dagamemastr1809
@dagamemastr1809 5 месяцев назад
I loved the story, great narrative. Thank you for sharing!
@peteryoung7924
@peteryoung7924 5 месяцев назад
Funny how the name of the enemy changed
@fberdf
@fberdf 5 месяцев назад
Some things dont really make sense. So the Kredox were driven back into hiding mostly by humans and some other species , they were a myth but the moment Zorgax looks for the weapons parts, they suddenly appear and they have a known territory ? If that is the case why did it took them so long to look for Human Tech, specially in areas where they were defeated, makes no sense. Had Zorgax discovered the human fleet 1 week or days later, would the Kredox have already the "human weapon" assembled by then?
@chadrowin2956
@chadrowin2956 5 месяцев назад
Here is a question. Would the two different technologies even be compatible?
@fberdf
@fberdf 5 месяцев назад
@@chadrowin2956Yes, a good question, organic hulls and human tech have nothing alike, but what i implied even makes less sense, there are some very interesting AI made stories, but this one has a lot of missing links!
@foconotimaoo
@foconotimaoo Месяц назад
Story videos like this are really cool, they capture people's attention on RU-vid.
@steelhorseman2482
@steelhorseman2482 9 дней назад
Thank you for writing your stories. I really enjoy them.
@joshtaylor485
@joshtaylor485 5 месяцев назад
i really liked listening to this story and more so after a stressful day today, thank you for having it here.
@frankg3243
@frankg3243 5 месяцев назад
The Kradoxs wants the Human Technology. Now the new Viridian threat? I like the story. I would like to hear Parts 2, 3, 4, 5, you know to the END!
@levichatillon5991
@levichatillon5991 5 месяцев назад
I need a story of aliens discovering what happened in WW1
@gillbarrett6509
@gillbarrett6509 5 месяцев назад
I liked the way the story had went better then alot of the other's
@rodeastman5465
@rodeastman5465 5 месяцев назад
I enjoyed this story and look forward to a sequel. Thank you!
@chazhammond
@chazhammond 5 месяцев назад
I couldn't turn it off, I listened to the end. I'm an advid Audio Books member, it would be great if your stories were a available there. there were some areas where more details would have helped. but overall, it was a very good listen.
@SuperScumble
@SuperScumble 5 месяцев назад
If you are listening on a mobile device, install firefox, set to desktop mode then load the video, minimize and it will work as audio with audio controls on the notifications ;)
@JasonMcCord-qk3yb
@JasonMcCord-qk3yb 5 месяцев назад
I like the story. It had a good plot, and your narration is excellent! Thank you!
@knightsofthehorizon2421
@knightsofthehorizon2421 5 месяцев назад
You have to continue it!!! I loved it alot it felt amazing hearing it
@bkodra
@bkodra 5 месяцев назад
Loved the story ! Wonderful job!
@cricketol
@cricketol 5 месяцев назад
they went bankrupt building them . money got in the way :(
@ObeMossop
@ObeMossop 5 месяцев назад
What happened after 50 mins? Previously they landed in a dropship, retrieved the energy core, engaged the enemy in battle and died heroes. Then engaged the enemy and somehow won, then landed on a planet using a matter transporter to retrieve the energy core…again?
@baldis12
@baldis12 5 месяцев назад
The story is sadly utter garbage
@johnstandfell9458
@johnstandfell9458 4 месяца назад
I love the stories you write Please keep up the excellent work
@bigpaul7085
@bigpaul7085 5 месяцев назад
I love story time ! I liked the story !
@psr0459
@psr0459 5 месяцев назад
I enjoyed this story. Thank you !
@sparky201
@sparky201 5 месяцев назад
Loved the story, well done.
@user-bh6jn4nf4j
@user-bh6jn4nf4j 5 месяцев назад
I really enjoyed this short story. ❤
@MrGadinck
@MrGadinck 5 месяцев назад
Loved the story!!
@lenny_1369
@lenny_1369 5 месяцев назад
holy shet, this is sick, i was listening for 5 minutes and didnt even realize its an hour long lmao, definitely binging
@jerrydutra3225
@jerrydutra3225 5 месяцев назад
Mini series!👍👍
@FanCharger
@FanCharger 5 месяцев назад
Good SciFi story
@noahkleugh9323
@noahkleugh9323 5 месяцев назад
Keep up the good work.
@JS-wt8vf
@JS-wt8vf 5 месяцев назад
About 28 minutes in, the subtitle get badly out of sync with the video.
@ryanmg02
@ryanmg02 5 месяцев назад
Well the intended audience for subtitles can't hear the issue
@JS-wt8vf
@JS-wt8vf 5 месяцев назад
@@ryanmg02 Except for those with certain learning and perceptual disabilities that need both. Subtitles are not exclusively for the deaf.
@carlosgarate2848
@carlosgarate2848 5 месяцев назад
@@ryanmg02 subtitles are not only for the impaired, I follow the audio with the subtitles cause sometimes the audio only is uniteligble
@duhrailed
@duhrailed 5 месяцев назад
Parts make me think of star trek Transporters,federation, andorians, etc Nice story tho
@VictorRodriguez-1958
@VictorRodriguez-1958 5 месяцев назад
I love the story. Good narrative. Many thanks
@albertross2322
@albertross2322 5 месяцев назад
❤ This is a great piece of work, it makes me wonder "what if" as though throughout our galaxy that someone is trying to contact our fledgling species not knowing if we've discovered electricity yet?😊
@andreasekman1379
@andreasekman1379 5 месяцев назад
I liked the story very much. It caught my interest and triggered my imagination. The loopholes are many though. Sometimes you had difficult to follow who was who. Another thing was the increasing awe of more advanced technology, one more devastating than the one before. That did not really make sense... Good luck in your future endeavours
@matt2513
@matt2513 4 месяца назад
I liked the story very much.
@pjhue6607
@pjhue6607 4 месяца назад
Cool story
@mike99ful
@mike99ful 5 месяцев назад
One of the best words I ever sent and listen to.
@Science2Fiction-bl3ki
@Science2Fiction-bl3ki 4 месяца назад
Love the story ❤
@thewisemanwalks
@thewisemanwalks 5 месяцев назад
this was my first. Loved it a nd hope to listen to more. :)
@2ndLeutenant
@2ndLeutenant 5 месяцев назад
I like the story so much that I have downloaded it. I hope you continue the story line.
@aliciaruiz8153
@aliciaruiz8153 5 месяцев назад
I enjoyed the story and would like to hear the ending of this story. Thank you.
@michaelhazzard4901
@michaelhazzard4901 5 месяцев назад
Am I the only one who noticed that they mixed up chapters here
@fathersplight6334
@fathersplight6334 5 месяцев назад
No. I felt the same way. Somewhere in the middle of the story started going backwards and I was confused who was fighting who.
@xoxide1017
@xoxide1017 5 месяцев назад
amazing story line.. would love to see it in more detail
@starclone4
@starclone4 4 месяца назад
I love these stories !!!!
@hadesdogs4366
@hadesdogs4366 4 месяца назад
I loved the story ❤
@DeltaAssualt
@DeltaAssualt 5 месяцев назад
Good story reminds me of the Homeworld series of games or other games with space travel, world exploration etc. hope for part 2.
@lordallenpatterson5313
@lordallenpatterson5313 5 месяцев назад
The price of peace is exponentially higher with each advancement. At some point it can turn the peacemakers into the very villains they fought so valiantly. At some point multiple species must work together for every lasting peace.
@michaelcopper7635
@michaelcopper7635 5 месяцев назад
Being a human hybrid, I like the story 😊
@terrym6300
@terrym6300 5 месяцев назад
Good story. Thanks.
@kjz9647
@kjz9647 4 месяца назад
I love this story
@rickycollard9715
@rickycollard9715 5 месяцев назад
Click on it listen to it keep your attention going I really enjoy your storytelling
@nyghtmyst5118
@nyghtmyst5118 4 месяца назад
Liked the story
@Robert-xm8hf
@Robert-xm8hf 5 месяцев назад
Love these stories. Keep it up
@tomschwarz579
@tomschwarz579 5 месяцев назад
Not bad. Keep it up. Ignore the haters Haters that do nothing themselves always gotta hate.
@joshaklese4969
@joshaklese4969 5 месяцев назад
I like this format.
@georgemagdaleno
@georgemagdaleno 5 месяцев назад
I liked the story. I subbed too. Thank You.
@darrylharris2366
@darrylharris2366 5 месяцев назад
Good story. Like the different view point.
@rachaelcourtnell7275
@rachaelcourtnell7275 5 месяцев назад
Good story, got gaps though.
@ivodaal8951
@ivodaal8951 5 месяцев назад
Nice story . They better make a movie about this story .
@adventurefilms
@adventurefilms 5 месяцев назад
wait until they find a lightsaber in one of the old ships junk drawers, lol
@troygroomes104
@troygroomes104 5 месяцев назад
Awesome story
@TheHumbleHobbiest
@TheHumbleHobbiest 5 месяцев назад
That was really entertaining thanks
@johncunningham5435
@johncunningham5435 5 месяцев назад
well narrated.
@tomshepard9050
@tomshepard9050 4 месяца назад
It's funny when human is in the role of "mysteriously leaving behind epic legacy" for "alien" to discover. I'd like to think that we were never gone completely but exist in terms of still bickering among ourselves for the most ridiculous shtt like "oy mate u looked at me wrong" and have hilarious reaction like "huh duh we made that? - lol lets sell it for scraps".
@davidlang4442
@davidlang4442 5 месяцев назад
Doesn't sound too bad as they win every encounter leaving the enemy dead on the floor.
@edsullivan5417
@edsullivan5417 5 месяцев назад
This would be a whole lot better if the author, somehow, could tell us how the bad guys found out about ALL of the information surrounding the components of the weapon. This story got redundantly DULL…never bothered to finish watching it.
@ClydeAdams-vq1tq
@ClydeAdams-vq1tq 5 месяцев назад
They probably mix moonsust Industrially, instead of Smeltering it all into Aluminum.
@johnmaniakas1848
@johnmaniakas1848 5 месяцев назад
I LIKE THIS STORIES.
@alaneason1741
@alaneason1741 5 месяцев назад
I liked the story
@OilersFlash
@OilersFlash 5 месяцев назад
Ok. Good story, but sadly the ending should have been their discovery that the Viridians are human and that they were an off shoot of humanity that were religious or autocratic or something interesting that caused a schism between the majority or humanity and these Viridians. That would have been a killer twist
@661gamer9
@661gamer9 5 месяцев назад
I like the story
@thomasschimdt5217
@thomasschimdt5217 5 месяцев назад
Yes I liked the story and would bet that a AI flim could be made out of it!
@matthewdriggers2928
@matthewdriggers2928 5 месяцев назад
I really enjoyed the story
@magicsinglez
@magicsinglez 4 месяца назад
This one makes little sense. Oh wait, The Kradox were searching for the weapon, too. They only had 2,000 previous years to search for it.
@scottbarrypunshon-9575
@scottbarrypunshon-9575 5 месяцев назад
Awesome this would make for a great movie mate??
@marcinmalczewski310
@marcinmalczewski310 5 месяцев назад
Its look lika story for next mass efect game. Going on adventure for patrs to mega canon. Pictures of abandoned ships look pretty nice
@hendrikbehrends4858
@hendrikbehrends4858 5 месяцев назад
i like the story
@haydenhelton6852
@haydenhelton6852 5 месяцев назад
Pretty good story.
@ohioborn9929
@ohioborn9929 5 месяцев назад
Good story, however...why would they not contact the humans when the "bad guys" came back. And I would have loved to hear why there was advanced human space tech long before they thought we had electricity...Atlanteans? Anunaki? I listened to the whole thing waiting for that answer...slightly bummed I didn't get an answer
@FatBunny168
@FatBunny168 4 месяца назад
feel like i am listening to stellaris x'D
@vincentvillanueva3234
@vincentvillanueva3234 5 месяцев назад
Humans did have flying city’s / military bases thousands of years ago. Bc ppl now can’t imagine they say it’s crazy. Yet I was able to get a scale model to float with a large amount of lbs . Providing that we have abilities to build flying city’s . I’m trying to start building them now but I guess it’s to much power for one group to have
@thomasgould9055
@thomasgould9055 5 месяцев назад
Reminds me of the galactic empires books, story called all the way back…
@gordan79
@gordan79 5 месяцев назад
The writing is really good, so much so that it makes up for other flaws. Having said that - some of the plot points really need to be thought out better for 2nd edition. How did Kradox not find out about this super-weapon from millenia ago? Was there a spy / mole leaking critical intelligence to them? No obvious attempts to find them and stop them? Was the 3rd module already found by the Kradox? Why was it in the middle of one of their military bases? If they had it for some time, did they not reverse engineer it? Wasn't the Intrepid essentially destroyed in the battle where they first used the human super-weapon? How is it seemingly back in action in the next scene?
@baldis12
@baldis12 5 месяцев назад
Yeah the story makes no sense at all.
@theforgotten1
@theforgotten1 5 месяцев назад
About 22mins in a whole fight scene goes missing and they're suddenly on the next planet!
@RUIZ90
@RUIZ90 5 месяцев назад
Love the story
@BoneSpears-and-StarShips
@BoneSpears-and-StarShips 5 месяцев назад
My friend that is a great piece of artwork you have attached to this brilliant story I'm assuming AI. If so, can you tell me your various profiles for generating that art
@visnuexe
@visnuexe 5 месяцев назад
It seems like this portion of the Federation story was written by a committe or with diverging plot lines that were knitted unsuccessfully together. Was it written with AI? Some portions seem not, yet other portions almost go like a story outline that had trouble resolving. Otherwise there certainly had action, danger and a bare minimum of detail to conclude the story, like a novel that got edited down to a novelette for magazine publication. Reminded me of the Hornblower by Forester, but with minimal character development. It was entertaining, though.
@xeskistiken2801
@xeskistiken2801 5 месяцев назад
I am sad to say i can participate in the defence of super earth due to technical errors
@jimbritt2874
@jimbritt2874 5 месяцев назад
Very nice 👍👍🇺🇲
@vestel777
@vestel777 4 месяца назад
Quick question for You. Why aren’t these awesome stories in order (Chronological Order)????? I don’t know which is the first story, second, third, or even fourth!!!!!! Which stories are “Stand Alone” stories.
@neilfinnegan440
@neilfinnegan440 5 месяцев назад
Too many commercials.....skipped adverts , a lot. A fun listen:)
@baldis12
@baldis12 5 месяцев назад
Holes in the story, and stiched together strange.. first battle for the first weapon part, just stopped, and onto the next. There.. the enginer who ran to the ship first with the core, suddenly was last to reach the ship, and had the core, and died. No mention that anyone of his crew got it?
@briandady9030
@briandady9030 2 месяца назад
Would have preferred a voice actor but; pretty good nintheless.
@peteratkin3788
@peteratkin3788 5 месяцев назад
I did enjoty the story, will there be a part 2?
@davecarter2508
@davecarter2508 5 месяцев назад
Repetitive, scoby-do type story, running around after mystery caches.
@harroldwheeler-jr5926
@harroldwheeler-jr5926 5 месяцев назад
Great storyline
@jasonlemuel5078
@jasonlemuel5078 5 месяцев назад
Tik tok is way better for this
@lulu111_the_cool
@lulu111_the_cool 5 месяцев назад
​@@jasonlemuel5078for what?
@brandish6361
@brandish6361 5 месяцев назад
While yall sit listening 😂
@fredharwood8948
@fredharwood8948 5 месяцев назад
The story jumps almost as if entire chapters had been cut from the narrative.
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