Most of comments here are about how supportive and generous the examiner is in this video... lol I guess a lot of you guys must have met so cynical and merciless examiners for your speaking test.. wish you all luck with meeting such a warm-hearted examiner for your future speaking exam
Still think there's too many grammar issues at a simple level (plurals etc) to get Band 8 but at least this particular video is a BIT closer to a high standard than some of the other ones on this clickbaity channel. Part 1 promised a 7.5 but it does deteriorate confidence and fluency wise so 7.0 is about right, in the end.
I think she's around 7.5 to be fair. She's really struggling in part 3, sometimes her answers are off-topic but in part 2 , she's actually doing pretty good.
I'd appreciate if you could correct this sentence grammatically and semantically.since I'm a naturalist person I cant really stand the constructions which are built day by day in other words we are surrounded by alot of constructions such as commercial and residential buildings. and there is no natural attraction in my hometown to spend afew hours there to get refreshed and relaxed
I'd appreciate if you could correct this sentence grammatically and semantically.the only thing that I like about my hometown is it's advanced civic amenities fortunately the municipality of my hometown pays much attention to the facilities and comfort of people also does many beatification operations in my hometown to make the view of city splendid inaddition it cares much about the cleanliness of my hometown's environment
the thing I like THE MOST about my hometown is THAT it HAS advanced civic amenities. LOCAL AUTHORITIES pay much attention to the comfort of THE CITIZENS. THAT'S WHY THEY CARRIED OUT SO MANY RENNOVATIVE PROJECTS in my hometown to make IT LOOK splendid. In addition, THEY ALSO care A LOT ABOUT THE ENVIRONMENT AND HAVE SPENT A LOT OF RESOURCES INTO MAKING IT CLEAN. In some points you have to remove redundant information: to make the view of city splendid -> to make it look splendid. Listeners already know that you're mentioning about the city's view, so stating the words is unnecessary. Also some phrases dont sound natural: beautification operations, fortunately, cleanliness. In a sentence, 'and' is used to connect two words that fall into the same category. "facilities" and "comfort of the people" seem to fall into different categories: one thing is tangible, and the other is not. That's why it's more natural if u use either "facilities and infrastructures" or "safety and comfort of the people". I hope it helps!
