"Little Black Bugs" by Vincent V Cava 

So true.

EXACTLY

-It's so accurate, it hurts-

Well really he just wrote enough that the story could be read out loud properly in an hour. You could (depending on your reading level) probably read this in maybe 20 minutes.

Mathew Rainville You must be fun at parties

The curse of the perfectionist.

@@ardatalessa162Me. Except I have like 20 unfinished short stories and books.

So many good qoutes in this one, 'ey?

Magma9567 like "he dropped like the number of attractive people at a Magic the Gathering Tournament"

Skyler VonDeben Precisely

Skyler VonDeben I feel like he used those two lines within such a short time span that the first one cannibalized my appreciation for the second line. Still liked the story though!

Seeing as how I've dealt with this, I personally don't find it all that funny Not really offended at all, but... More so, just dark humor I'm not into. *shrugs*

The true horror is how its so realistic that pretty girls fall for guys like that tbh like idk how well you can trust the narrators description but God his personality sounded obnoxious

he’s a tooL but u guys know that he’s the best character in the story. he’s hiLarious 🤣 onLy fictionaL frat tooLs are ever that cooL

Vincent v cava's analogies are fucking hilarious

So insulting! I'm going to give him a terrible Yelp review! He is such a good writer. Now I'm embarrassed to play magic though lol

The analogies are good, but they feel a bit out of place within such a story generally. Bit forced.

Doesnt work as an analogy. Attractive people disappear from magic the gathering events?

@@smokyroom5725 ikr? If they were there, weren't they intending to play MTG?? OR. Do people become ugly and disfigured once a game of MGT begins? Meh. It's a really cheesy and lazy metaphor.

Bc he’s a fatty irl

Western bacon chee.

it’s hiLarious

What?? This writing is trash tier. Obviously no thought went into it, it reeks of first draft. Good reading though.

Well I enjoyed it too. Each to their own. I’ll keep an eye out on your channel for your wonderful stories considering you think this is so bad. I cannot wait. Come on, give us a good one. Something worthy of a feature film.

It’s well read definitely but it’s a take on telltale heart and not a great one

thevideogameempire omg yes

“The box, you opened it. We came.”

Why are you ripping of Edger Allen Poe with this comment

@@meganstorr2620 have you heard of a quote, Virginia 12 year old?

+supleted if you made it to the end, you'll know why they didn't rent two apartment for their "sons"

+Cjay Cruz I still don't get that part. I know his brother wasn't real but were the bugs real?

Wot, I didn't even realize

i think the little black bugs were his depression

cute profile pic 😘 Gabe is fucking adorable

pteraptosaurus Yeah, I think I started gagging around the toilet and bathroom description. Ugh so gross. xD

pteraptosaurus I gagged about the whole freaking building! Kinda felt bad because I relate to that stuff. Besides my mom, I'm the cleanest person in my house.

The piss cups are what really got me. Gross.

@@plushmonster1318 I actually skipped it forward through it after the first 10 seconds or so of the bathroom description!

@@trmx4 surely the others in your household aren't that bad?

XDDDDDDD -Kathleen

Ok the feels is real ........ so much feels, so hard to cope .....

the main character even said he wouldnt have much time for detail xD

He dragged him out in a box remember? Well actually he just dragged a random box. Cause he was his brother.

And the CCTV at the fast food place where he dropped the car..I had thought of that too

@@MsSpidey2 yes but the point being if they really were investigating a murder then seeing the brother of the victim dragging a box big enough to fit his body in out to the supposedly stolen car then that would be a pretty big giveaway

@@PrimateProductions but he was his brother. He had no brother he was donald.

The video on public transport, the guest house would have been checked, where did he dispose of the box? Would have had his dna outside brothers inside, friends would have been questioned mentioned the scream, and that he said he sprained wrists, unless he kept it in mind cameras next day would have shown him using it at some point...after requestioning him in a station when he became suspect prime cops would have read body language and knew. Pressing further his clothing would have been recovered, fibers matched when lake would have been dragged...body recovered. Tires left recent tracks, traffic cams would have been check from the night before report of car, him being too concerned over brother instead of pissed at the fact he took his car. And like about a dozen other things. Yeah perfect crime🤔 He was caught off the start. What they don't have forensic science or detectives where you at. Edit...if he was Donald who did he kill or was he just batsht crazy?

Kyle Dayton lesser known, as Telltale Heart was assigned in English during high school/Middle school for (I’m assuming) some if not most people.

I feel like it's inspired by, if not a tribute to, both. The "I'm not insane, because insane people don't do x" is clearly from The Telltale Heart, but "those bugs, it's their fault! I didn't do it, it's all them" is most definitely from The Rats in the Walls. Obviously, Poe is much more commonly known than Lovecraft, or at the very least, The Telltale Heart is more well known than The Rats in the Walls, so people will usually tend to refer to it first.

I'll have to check it out. Sounds really good.

Ikr -Kathleen

Abbreviated you mean?

@@PrimateProductions yes I was slow 5 years ago

His writing style is amazing. Its dark and deep yet also funny at the same time.

Christopher Duncan Defiantly. This guy has a gift for this sort of thing. :)

In great detail at that

justapup456 Sounds like a plan :3

agreed

canned-fruits agreed! I like his “Patio Door” story too

So.. So basically I like to listen to them while sleeping

GhostKnight Lol, I liked your first description better. Very well worded, btw.

Drugs i am so glad I am not the only one.

Cemetary Chains I know...Isn't it just surreal?

@@SuperMegaKickass it can lead to some stellar dreams .....and some horrifying sex dreams.

Meeting that wussy

It's really good

SLEEP? Whats sleep?

They sell it at flea markets.

Sleep is for the weak.

NUMB Dvineyards It's when you get in the bed; lock your door; lay down; get in your pants; have it under the covers; and pump away.

Edward James Kenway someone didn't stay to the end

Hehe... Edward James Kidnay...

***** I did, he killed himself, and there was some metaphorical thing that he was a clean freak with false dreams.

Close but no cigar my friend. That's not what happened.

***** so...psycho person with split personality has a weird run in with bugs and he thinks that he kills his brother, who is actually him, and then he kills himself after lighting the apartment on fire....huh. definitely not your average pasta.

I usually don't like the long readings, but this story had from the begining to the end. Really good. Congratulations.

You should do more of these. I really enjoyed this one

Conrado C If you want another really good lengthy one, try tunnels. That one always stuck with me, and is one of my all time favorite, next to devil's jaws.

Do you mean The Tunnels Ritual? It's the only one i know with that name. The Devil's Jaws is one of my favorites too.

Conrado C No, it's not that one. I remember it being upwards of half an hour long and really really interesting. I can't find it either now, though. Maybe I've got the wrong name. Gotta' go looking for it now. I'll tell you when I come up with it.

Geez.. maybe you need a real GF

@@PrimateProductions bruh you are dumb you are really really dumb

Maybe elizabeth is a dirty girl. Ya know, kinky. Sexual active. Into that guy 4 real. He never actually said anything that made him seem like an actual man whore.

@@robertcampbell3019 powell?? Lol

Neutron stars roll?

Agreed

Dana Scroggins Oh Naruto, good times.

very fucking carefully apparently

But "A Telltale Heart" IS cool :D

***** I know, I said this thing was cool. Not that the other one wasn't.

Pete Detrick yeah I noticed that as well. I noticed that the guilt he was feeling was similar to the protagonist in "A Telltale Heart"

I'm guessing that he had multiple personality disorder and he was living the life of both himself and his brother through only one body. So no, he didn't actually kill anyone, he's just crazy.

Landfish100 He might well have killed *someone*. Maybe a bum. Maybe the raving bum at the bus stop was more than *just* a hallucination. So much fun to speculate.

Landfish100 So...whose body did he dispose of? Did he have a roommate that he never acknowledged the existence of, but was just there?

Dawn Wayfinder Maybe. I always just thought there was no body and he was just being crazy, but i guess its possible that he killed someone else

Adrian Adams I don't think he killed anyone. I think he was just craaaazy

That's what she said

Ha lol

CapatianCupcakes I dont know why...but the cheesy joke had me .XD

He already had been, so he probably would have gone for even longer. But that's not as fun as killing him, is it?

You didn't listen to the whole thing, did you?

=.= I did. Ik now, read the damn post before typing

Maybe he lives in a place where weed smoking is legal?

+Mr. Wen \m/ Colorado?

Honestly, I had to go to return to the video three times just to get through it. That was the most disturbing thing I have ever heard.

You guys should hear the creepypasta called Meek.

meek the fut fuck....

Try reading Happy Appy

OnesionRa Seems about right.

On a hill is the longest I've seen, 2 hours. It's a great pasta though, the writer really immerses you in the setting.

PLOT TWIST its actually a BOOK!!!

Creepsmcpasta has a 2 hour i watched :D Seriously the scariest shit though.....

+Agent Krypton Its by Vincent Vena Cava. He's always amazing.

Just Edgar Allen Poe in general

that's what I was thinking XD

the bugs just fallow him( like the old man)

+kenman 914 as in, the old hobo

Fucking Stalker Hobo!!!

+Nikolaus Stevens I know right? What makes more sense, killing your kin, or fucking leaving the damn place? At least have a talk with him first and let him know if he doesnt change his nasty ways you're literally going to kill him. A warning you know?

haha I got the reference! 😄

UNDERTAIL! -Kathleen

+My Chemical Otaku You know that Undertail is the porn tag, right?

Haha nice reference

Probably not. He probably had a split personality and hallucinated himself killing his "brother."

Firestar1992 then what about the bugs bites?

Firestar1992 then what about the bugs bites?

The bugs were real.

Maybe the bug bites were hallucinogenic? That would be interesting.

calm down m8 just slowly put the knife down

and slice

lol

Is it creeeeeeeeeeepppppyyyy

Magma9567 yes it is

melissa3289 Fucking disgusting

melissa3289 Oh stahp! You're making me hungry.

Eyeless Jack How can you even read or type?