47 Time Machine (Demo 3) - Hawaii Part II Part II 

This sounds like it would be one of Tally Hall's original songs.

Alternate title: Time machine but it's a normal Tally Hall song

Turn the lights off: Grow up dude Time Machine: Deny the Future

i prefer this over the original, because DAMN ROB SOUNDS HEAVENLY

THE METRONOME AT THE “WAIT” PART IS GENIUS I’M CRYING

Exploring tally hall/joe hawley’s demo archive is so wild you’re just continuously finding gems

This could have been on Good and Evil

time machine overall is underrated

Both versions are so good and convey such different tones even though they have basically the same lyrics

I never hated Tally Hall’s use of roboticy voices, but man if this doesn’t slap without a filter.

i need another tally hall album so bad...

Nobody gonna talk about how the description links everyone's spotify, but zubin's link is just a picture of him?

I think this is prettier than the actual song

guys.. he changed "working in dimension number 4" to "playing in dimension number 4".. cause all work and no play makes us crazy ...

I love how drastically different the demos are to the album release

that's rob cantor singing right? doesn't sound like joe hawley

"You can make ever wait for you" is one of the most hauntingly beautiful lines I've ever heard or read.

Look Oh look at what you've done now to me Dead tired and ornery I'm leaving today today Thinking of the way I used to spend the time I can see that I have overpaid Past is passed and rather than regret the old I can live it back the other way See look Just look at when you've done now to me Free floating temporally I'm leaving today today I avoid the messiness of misery Working in dimension number four I can get away at any time I like Any time I’d like forevermore Live the dream in a time machine You've been waiting forever You can make ever wait for you Do what you want to do Live the dream in a time machine You've been waiting forever There’ll be time enough to spend some time alone Wait I await for all eternity This endless modernity Forever today I stay Now I know the nature of the emergency Now I know why now is never gone In the wheel I need another memory Keeping up this pace of keeping on Live the dream in a time machine You've been waiting forever You can make ever wait for you Do what you want to do Live the dream in a time machine You've been waiting forever There’ll be time enough to spend some time alone All alone All alone Time alone There ya go, the lyrics to this demo

This version feels so much more alive and calming than the og? Not that the og is bad, but it conveys a much more unsettling vibe, which is more in tune with the rest of the album

The live version of this was recently deleted and I think I might cry

Fun fact: I cry to this song at least 7 times a day

His voice in the chorus makes me so happy

OH MY GOD i have had the lyrics “floating temporally” stuck in my head for days but i couldn’t for the life of me remember if it was from time machine or the demos or if i was just making shit up but i finally found it. it was driving me fucking insane

Friendship ended with _Fate of the Stars (Demo)_ , now _Time Machine (Demo 3)_ is my best friend.

I just got the joke in the lyric "im leaving today"

If Tally Hall had end credits, this song would be it.

I honestly like robotic sounding songs and natural voice songs so I have no idea what is better for me both are sooo good and so easy to get stuck in my head

Look what you made me do < Look at what you've done now to me

Now I can finally understand what they're saying through the autotune Pardon, the "auditory editing to the vocals of this song" Second edit, yeah autotune literally means "automatic keep your voice in tune" which Rob doesn't need cus he's already angelic at singing :>

This sounds like it would be a reprise if the musical was longer. I love it, makes me soooo happy ahhhhh

ok so i like time machine but this is easily better than time machine like what the heck

and i didn't think i could like this song any more

there was another demo to this song, but the uploader deleted their channel, subsequently deleting the video. im very sad

if i eated this song it would taste like cotton candy with rainbow sprinkles

Both final and this demo are really good in their own right. This feels straight out of tally hall. While the finalized fits well with Hawaii part II.

Exploring Demos is so weird. Like this is fucking amazing

Why do I feel like this song would fit perfectly into "not a trampoline"?

Better than the one in the actual album, fight me for it

seeing everyone dissing the final version in this comment section is really disheartening /: i like them both equally. I absolutely adore the final version for it's strange techno glitchcore/sciencecore feel but this one is a completely different energy that i also super vibe with. some people just have no appreciation for multiple different music genres and it really shows

If I ever make the "Hawaii: The Musical" that I've had in my mind for months now, I'm absolutely putting this in instead of the regular song

robs voice make my heart go 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥰😳😳👀

Over time this has become better than the final for me

This version feels organic while the Hawaii part II Release feels like something out of my singing monsters

This has helped me write songs and not feel afraid of it sounding cluttered and rough at first. Because this is what it sounds like before they actually polish it. It doesn't sound as good as the final version. This was just when they were seeing what worked and then they made it sound awesome.

out of all the demos this one really stands out

Ok, so, we can all agree this versions superior, right?

Some of this kinda sounds like Greener and I dig ittt

this is a banger after listening to the original

This is the only demo that I think is better than its official version

at first i didn't especially like this one, then at 1:18 that guitar came in and i was like _wOAH-_ it reminds me of the guitar in certain lemon demon songs, and i just love it man

silly simon, you can't make ever wait for you. don't you understand? time is the ruler of everything

I feel like I've heard this version a lot more than the full release

that zubin link in the description caught me off guard ngl

I would die for all three versions if they were people ngl

Y’all say this fits into tally hall but to me it feels more exclusive to the way “not a trampoline” sounds.

SOMEONE OVERLAY THIS SONG ONTO THE ORIGINAL PLEASE

listening to this while peeling super glue off my hands

This sounds a lot more like a tally hall demo, not just cus of robs voice, but the entire instrumental and vibe, if theyd polished it more like this itd fit perfectly next to spring and a storm or hidden in the sand, maybe out in the twilight. It doesnt really match the finished vibe of hawaii part ii though, so i think the final version is better, but i actually like this a lot

omg the suave fellow

I love the album version of time machine, I'd even say it's one of my favourites. but DAMN this version is astronomically better and I wish the album version would be more like it! it's so good

This version is way better

0:41 "Just look at WHEN you've done to me"

Every time I hear this I just remember how amazing the music they could make if they return. Imagine everything all of the members made combined, it would be the closest thing to the perfect album ever

THIS IS SO YUMMY

I dare you to listen to this hith beats headphones and fuck with the chord. Shit gets crazy, you can switch from quazi-instrumental to full song in milliseconds.

ive noticed around the third demo is when the song jumps to sound more finished

ok this is 1000x better than the final song, i love sm rob voice 😭 for me, time machine demos >>>>> final time machine

every demo and the og song all sound like a different genre

Even if those demos ain't official they sound like they'd fit perfectly into the album

oh man i love weezer

rib cancer and his riblets

3:36 SAY IT AINT SOOO

jesus time machine was SO different.

I love how they turned it into a typical rock song

LOving the way he says dream in the chorus this demo ver is so good

I love the way he sings "forever" in the chorus.

I seriously love the Time Machine demos so much

my best friend lily says "we're living the dream in a time machine being able to relive this old version of the song"

holy shit it's robert howard cantor

This sounds like end credits music

People often forget how talented rob is on the piano

The final version fits better with the rest of the album but GOD THIS VERSION FUCKING SLAPS

honestly, i prefer this version than the finished one. I really like how you can hear rob's voice in this one.

ROB!!!!!!

Personally, I like this much more than the final version...I don’t know the distortions really aren’t doing it for me on that one. I love Rob’s voice it’s perfect as it is no distortions needed 😔👌

ngl this does feel more emotional overall than the final, and the final feels more unsettling, but i do like the final better. idk im a brain over heart person and i love unsettling horror.

Man This Demo is just so Beautiful and Incredible to listen Rob did such an incredible job with the emotions of the verses. The Chorus is the highlight for me.

this is by far my favorite version of this song

god i adore the drums on this

the change from "OOOH 17" to this is really drastic & This sounds like a Tally Hall song.

Man I miss Tally Hall so much…

I really wish they had polished this version out a little bit more because it's super fucking cool.

This is good but the album version scratches my brain in a special way

WE WERE ROBBED. THIS IS BETTER THAN THE ALBUM VERSION

My fav demo

This sounds so 1970s! I love it so much

this is so good wtf

Personally I like the demo more than the final version lol, it's so good

bro that "oooooh" was smooth was fuck

i wish hawaii pt ii pt ii was on spotify 😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩