How to write the perfect piece of descriptive writing 

what grade you get

At least mine is tomorrow FYI ts 25th here Mach 2019

@@severoseverin3193 Even mine is tomorrow by the way it is 26th March 2019

@@Aryan-fd9yv did u pass

@@zimflame2368 yeah I did, thanks

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Me im in set 8

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But did you like it? Has it helped you to understand how to improve your own writing?

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit Hahaha yep, I was just kidding, it definitely helped. I watched the video while cramming for an English test (which was in the IGCSE format) and I did noticeably better in regards to the quality of my writing (and have generally been having an easier time with writing), thanks :)

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Thank you, that's so lovely to hear. I hope the video has helped

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit yes indeed

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Wow that's so accurate

Don't panic, just remember what you have to include and execute 😁

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit Thanks, just finished the video and it has helped me a lot!

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+Arjun Andra It may seem so, but it is not. This is because even though he is, in a way, narrating an incident, it is filled with detailed descriptions of all five senses (except taste of course).

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Jane Jiang no problem. feel free to like and share

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The English Teacher Please keep doing more of these videos, I’m so much more confident now. Thank you 🙏🏿 ❤️

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@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit Hi so my exam is tmrw and one of the questions was to describe a coffee shop and your thoughts and feelings, would it be possible if you looked over what I wrote and helped me, please. It was a small space, it feels like the walls move closer to you every day, the windows are like telescopes to the future but the tinted windows discourage you, every day the same thoughts rush to your head about how you can get to a better job, walking from the cash register to the machine and back became like a dance routine, every day there is a shimmer of hope when you meet new people, are they nice, mean, or irritating. The few minutes you get as a break during the day goes by in seconds, sitting on the shaky, beaten chair with flakes of coffee powder and an array of sweets and snacks spilled like something just exploded. The shop has a deafening silence in the night and the morning has people taking lazy baby steps to enter and they exit feeling happy and fueled and leap through the tall glass doors. The only thing that makes me sane is my midday escapes when I dump all my thoughts to the chirping carefree birds who care more about me than the people in my life, also the gentle breeze flicking my hair up and down. My job is simple, crafting every drink with utmost precision and seeing the gentle and hesitant smile on the many that get served by me. Getting through the tempting coffee mugs that just end up sitting in your house and collect dust and the useless gift cards and greeting cards that you never use can actually be impossible to get through without buying with the colors glowing and hypnotizing your eyes, seeing different signs that say offer or sale or limited time can trick the kid inside you and pull you in. Finishing up the day carrying any leftover food like Santa Claus on Christmas day to the many unfortunate homeless who are dirty and miserable and hating life, serving them with a warm dinner reminding them of their childhood puts the biggest smile on my face nudging me to come back to work the next day. After several slow months, the unbreakable bonds you make with other inmates are amazing, laughing about the various different people and the chatting up a good looking girl who thinks she is so much better than us and flicking her hair that slaps us back into reality and reminding us that we are just coffee shop people. Watching heart-melting birthday surprises and heartbreaking breakups make Netflix and Hulu look like garbage. The day silently ends and I walk out with gentle strides and take a sigh before I lock up and walk down the empty streets and shining stars hoping for a better morning.

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit please try and check this out ?

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@@moniesshgunasegaran5910 doesnt matter in the end

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UltimateR_954 I'm glad to have helped

How’d it go?

@@Idkdude2015 It was two years ago I'm doing A-Level now lol

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@@yashmehta3560 thank you!

I hope you mean't that in a good way?

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Practise a couple of types of narrative writing (positive and negative). Re-draft these until they are perfect and then learn these for the exam

Keep practising, watch this video and you'll be fine

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit Thanks!

It was too broad in my opinion.You used imprecise metaphors, and every sentence was hyper focused, independent line that had the feeling of several needles stabbing here and there. You used the colons and semicolons wrong.They are used to elaborate on a single point, not string together several different ones

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+blendcoco Already done. check out the following: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-9tZfhExm7kY.html

+The English Teacher aha oh yeah thanks again

I'll leave that to you :-)

when you write a descriptive piece you need to have a section where the atmosphere has switched (eg. happy at the beginning then switch to sad). to do that, sometimes having a flashback or a scene that you’ve made up (but still related to the picture) can help. i hope this makes some sense?

Not really. Use the example to help you

Not me

Good luck!

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit thanks! It's tomorrow!

Ten minutes to plan and 35 to write

Send it to my Facebook page which you can access on my channel

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How did it go?

The English Teacher It went really well thank you!!!

I believe I wrote it in about 500 words

Hello, this video is a story (a descriptive one). Are you looking specifically for the perfect essay writing video? ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-XB40-KM14RA.html

Ahh ... Thanks a lot..💕

Do you mean dialogue? You can but sparingly as you do not want to create too much plot

Saddam Hussein yes depending on your narrative perspective

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It won't be. And even if it is, create the magic with your words (modernism)

Okay thanks

Try using a thesaurus and select a few words that you feel comfortable using in your writing and then just practise using them so it begins to feel natural. Good luck with your revision and feel free to share with others

Hello. I hope you found this useful?

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit ye

Your teacher will before the exam board ask for a sample of the marking to check it's accurate

Itz Tetra you can send me work via my Facebook page. go to my channel site to locate the link

could you please asses my work too ?

Because you are a bright individual who seeks answers

Well, you've come to the right place. Hopefully, this gives you the answers you're looking for

I think it's fine. The problem is with your speakers😎😱

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@@monsterjazzlicks maybe Ur expectations r too high

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